Love Lost

I fell deep into his soul
So deep I almost drowned
My eyes became water wells
Overflowing into rivers
That flowed violently underneath me
I couldn’t stop it
I couldn’t scream
His silence was loud enough for the both of us
Still no one could help me
I was in too deep
We wandered in the forest of love
Happy as can be
Until I lost him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 13, 2014 at 11:24 AM
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June 13, 2014 at 10:42 AM
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June 13, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Feel free. Thanks!
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