Love Lost

If today was was the day, my very last I hope to someday make a past Life without you is insane I gave u sunshine, U gave my rain Left my heart in so much pain your like a thief running through my mind You stole my heart and left me blind Alway's search but never find I gave you my heart And you broke it apart Left with nothing and nowhere to start

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2016 10:15:00 PM

ANDRE CROSBY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 5:06:00 PM

andre crosby, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~

James Fraser

Date: 5/18/2011 8:48:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Andre .....:)

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2011 5:02:00 PM

Great Job Andre, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Andre. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 4:35:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, Andre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/16/2011 4:57:00 PM

Congrats Andre on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest with this clever entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/10/2011 2:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for your entry, please double check the contest rules and the example. I hope to read more of your work soon and that you feel better. Light & Love

Samantha Drummond

Date: 4/8/2011 4:47:00 PM

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Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2011 6:10:00 PM

Welcome to the soup and keep up the excellent writing~~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/1/2011 3:55:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Andre. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Marilin Rodriguez

Date: 3/31/2011 6:51:00 PM

This was simple yet profound many times people don't get even half of what they give Good write