Love Lost

If today was was the day, my very last
I hope to someday make a past
Life without you is insane
I gave u sunshine, U gave my rain
Left my heart in so much pain
your like a thief running through my mind
You stole my heart and left me blind
Alway's search but never find
I gave you my heart
And you broke it apart
Left with nothing and nowhere to start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/6/2016 10:15:00 PM
ANDRE CROSBY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:06:00 PM
andre crosby, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Andre .....:)
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:02:00 PM
Great Job Andre, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Andre. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, Andre
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:57:00 PM
Congrats Andre on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest with this clever entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight..
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your entry, please double check the contest rules and the example. I hope to read more of your work soon and that you feel better. Light & Love
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:47:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:10:00 PM
Welcome to the soup and keep up the excellent writing~~
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Andre. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2011 6:51:00 PM
This was simple yet profound many times people don't get even half of what they give Good write
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