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::::Love Locked::::

. Locked Yes locked her tumescent to mine I felt her rapid breathe As Mine dukes latched to her fundament pulling her vibrate 'gainst mine wild Ourn torsos locked Her bulging eyne brimming with love's wet whilst mine reaches hern depth Ourn bodies yaw loving each's sweat Ourn maws exclamating Vehemently "yesss" As mine lurch retreats Ourn together watches as the ebb from hern glisters

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/17/2021 11:16:00 AM

Goodness, the Appalachian Trail is quite lovely I surmise!

James Peranteau
Date: 10/19/2021 5:18:00 AM

;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/25/2021 6:57:00 AM

What scrumptious vocabulary. No one else could describe this experience in the same way. I wonder how she would react to reading this piece? My favourite read of the day. ;0)

James Peranteau
Date: 10/4/2021 5:48:00 AM

Thank you for the vote of confidence dear poet! And with regard her reading this; yikes! I had to hide the write from her....the repeat performances are causing mine rapid old Richard....LOL...Have a creative day sir...much love, james

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/2/2021 1:29:00 PM

Your a real charmer James, and have a way with words, but you leave me wondering did any pillow talk follow on, perhaps enough said already, cheers David

James Peranteau
Date: 9/15/2021 7:24:00 PM

There were no pillowz dear poet; i found this South Carolina lovely ...fortuitous...moment, along an Appalachian trail one Summer on a sweltering August afternoon...afterward it was more like..."let's hit a creek girlie" *sm...have a great week...much love, james

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/1/2021 6:48:00 PM

A sensual write James and always very unique. love phyl

James Peranteau
Date: 9/15/2021 7:35:00 PM

*winks....have a great week dear poet....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2021 12:40:00 PM

It's like you have your very own language, James!! But the message still comes through!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/28/2021 11:15:00 PM

Classic sensual poetry, James,