Love Letter Ii

ETHEREAL EMBRACE
In divine abode of Hindu god Indra To the music played by the Gandharva Dances celestial dancer Apsara Astral beauty glitters on Menaka. On earth you came from heaven like angel Ascetic’s stern meditation you broke I know how alluring can be your spell Fire of secret craving in me you stoke. In my enticed vision you come alive I see you dance in enlivened fresco My sensual dream doesn’t break, I strive Let my life shine in ethereal glow. You’re a hidden star in heaven somewhere I’ll find your warm embrace when I go there.
March 27, 2018.

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:37:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Subimal - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:05:00 AM
I must confess I am not at all conversant with Hindu Gods or Goddesses but did not detract from a wonderful read... Congratulations... Mick
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Date: 4/10/2018 2:20:00 AM
Excellent Subimal! Congratulations on your wonderful third placement! : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/11/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Date: 4/9/2018 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/11/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 4/9/2018 2:57:00 PM
Beautiful and inspirational, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/9/2018 3:40:00 AM
This poem is a warm embrace in it's sensuality Subimal. Well done on your placement.
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Date: 4/8/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/9/2018 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 4/8/2018 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/9/2018 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/8/2018 1:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Subimal, your descriptive poem is so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/9/2018 12:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Date: 3/28/2018 6:06:00 PM
Beautifully woven. I admit to being ignorant about your culture and now feel compelled to look up all whom you referred to in your first stanza. Without meaning to do so, you may be the reason I learn something today! Thank you for that and the poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/29/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay for visiting. The basis is Hindu mythology. Apsaras are depicted in many ancient sculptures, paintings and frescos in India and in the neighboring countries.
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