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Love Letter

In elegant gait, you drift with me My heart- swan precious as river, fresh Like an eternal wave of devotion purely warmed As our necks entwine through nature aligned: Your flutter of plumes ignites my soul While creamy beaks cleanse each other, Making us flit into the dew of moonlight as one-- This ballet performed in circles Enthralls an audience rounding the pond... I ask then, are humans mated to life like us? Could our dance show them just how divine We glide together bobbing as one?... And so, in the stream of waters fine, Take me across the lake and allow Such pleasure of our movement, whole To be gently fed by all seasons' charms, While I , in winter's chill, bestow upon YOU My grace, my oath ...of time evermore. Love Story Contest sponsored by Viv Wigley 11/11/2017

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Date: 11/15/2017 8:12:00 AM
You are the Queen of Romance.....congratulations on a beautiful winning poem, Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/14/2017 2:31:00 AM
Beautiful birds Nette and a wonderful write. I know a place where I used to see 3 pairs of swans swimming on a small pond. One pair was white another black and the last black necked swans with white body and black neck and head,
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Date: 11/13/2017 7:01:00 PM
Back with Congratulations! :) xomo!
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:30:00 PM
congrats on your win nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2017 7:49:00 AM
So neautiful, Nette and congrats on your win !!
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:08:00 AM
Congrats on this beautiful piece, nette, and thanks for contributing to my contest. Viv x
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Date: 11/13/2017 5:19:00 AM
So graceful and beautiful in your description of the essence of love. Congratulationd
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Date: 11/13/2017 12:45:00 AM
This is pure beauty in every single way. Congrats, Nette.
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations, nette on your great win.
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:13:00 PM
This is elegantly beautiful in all its romantic aspects, Nette! A love story for all seasons. Full marks to you. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/12/2017 7:37:00 AM
- A delightful love letter, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:38:00 AM
Excellent. Said beautifully. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/11/2017 3:05:00 PM
this is really beautiful
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:38:00 AM
That was excellent, Nette, a swanlike romance :)
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Date: 11/11/2017 4:43:00 AM
I believe you have captured the essence of true love, that which exists for two to be together forever "Making us flit into the dew of moonlight as one--," capturing how two swans mate for life, always being as one...wondering if we humans have the capacity to hold onto just one mate forever! I have found mine, so many have not and have found divorce a final resting place for their love...such sadness within that thought, but this poem is filled with such hope of finding that true love, GW!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 11:02:00 PM
Beautifully done Nette! You have captured their grace splendidly in this piece, my best to you in the contest! :)
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Date: 11/10/2017 3:48:00 PM
Beautiful Nette. I like the line, bobbing as one :)
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