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Love Letter

My Dearest Colorful Queen, Thirty seven colors in one tail feather The most beautiful Peacock ever That's what you are... A euphoric tail feathered star All perfectly placed like a work of art Be still my heart... Everything you chirp it hurts Hurts in an oh so lovely way Each and every day... Did you put this lump in my throat Because I can't even swallow You I will follow... When your presence is close my dear You are all that I can hear Your voice so clear... I want to wrap you in my wings And sing songs like song birds sing Will you marry me??? Together forever in turquoise harmony You are already a part of me We are forever lasting... Let's fly together in our dreams To our own nest for future offspring One big happy family... I have your ring to match your beautiful artistry I had it sized for your claw perfectly It's meant to be... I am honored to be in your presence Each and every precious second Please say yes please... As I humbly await your reply Love, that Peacock Guy Written for contest: "Love Letter" Hosted by : Viv Wrigley 10/29/17 Won 1st Place in Contest Results

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Date: 11/15/2017 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your first place win. The dignity of his love shows through. Best, SuZ
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/15/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Susan and it is nice to hear from you again
Date: 11/14/2017 2:15:00 AM
I love the layout Brian. He's smitten for sure.
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/14/2017 10:43:00 AM
That he is my friend, thank you
Date: 11/13/2017 6:29:00 PM
Dropping back to say congrats on your win Brian:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 6:53:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 11/13/2017 8:31:00 AM
Such a sweet love letter artistically delivered with words and form, Brian. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Sandra you know I am always excited to receive positive words from you, one of the great poets here in the Soup
Date: 11/13/2017 7:46:00 AM
This is adorable, Brian, Congrats on your win !!
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you kind sir
Date: 11/13/2017 6:19:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you, Brian, was sure this would win top spot:)
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thanks again Jo
Date: 11/13/2017 6:07:00 AM
Well done, Brian, on this flighty, lovely letter. A worthy topster in my contest. Regards, Viv
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you so much and I am honored to have received such an outstanding placement in your contest!
Date: 11/13/2017 12:43:00 AM
So beautifully written and I love the format too. Congratulations!
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, now time to go read yours as well
Date: 10/31/2017 3:32:00 PM
Don't worry there is no way your lady Peacock could refuse you after this lovely and well written poem letter! Nice job!
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2017 3:56:00 PM
Thanks for the vote of confidence and I appreciate your comments on my work
Date: 10/31/2017 10:32:00 AM
Wow! I'm flattered, Brian, excellent love letter:)
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2017 1:25:00 PM
Wow so they do work don't they? Lol thank you for reading
Date: 10/30/2017 8:26:00 AM
Any 'bird' would be charmed by your lovely letter Brian:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/30/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Jan it is good to hear from you always!!

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