Love Letter

When you are with me,
                       I discern the world in a new facet
                            When I see through you,
                       I am transported into a new planet

You know me more than I do
You don't even know what you have done
You have changed my life's view 
I started enjoying the pretty little things

                             When my friends see us together 
                        They don't even dare to disturb us
                             For,they know you are my life 
                           And I can't take my eyes off you

The day I met you,I have fallen in love 
and started believing in love at first sight 
I want to spend the rest my life with you
I am ready to bare your weight and accessories 

                         Let us seek wonders and rock together 
                                    My dearest camera
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chansarkar Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Love for camera expressed so well,Supraja. Loved it.
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:07 AM
A great love letter, congratulations Supraja...
Turner Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Very clever, Supraja. Thanks for the smile:)
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 5:45 PM
supraja , very good :-)
Kannan Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Thank you so much EVE...
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 9:29 AM
I don't think you disappointed Victor (just noticed your reply to him) I think he liked it because he was taken in by it!)
Kannan Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 10:01 AM
True Andrea...He liked it but he expected some best ending... So I thought that I had disappointed him... Didn't mean it literally...
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 9:28 AM
wow, is this for Franks' contest. What a cool way to end it!! I did not see it coming.
Kannan Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Thank you so much Andrea... So glad you liked it... Yes..but I forgot to enter the contest...Thank you for reminding me...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 11:42 AM
I was taken in, expecting thus a great love affair and was so happy for you dear, Supraja! Anyway, if you happy, I am happy for you! Enjoyed it dear friend!
Kannan Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 7:26 AM
Oh I am sorry if I disappointed you... Thank you for your visit and comment...
Turner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Aw shucks! I was hoping you were talking about me. Really a fun read Supraja:)
Kannan Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 7:21 AM
Ha ha...Thank you so much...
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