Love Letter

In the back of her closet, high upon the shelf, there sits an old love letter, that she keeps to herself. Its pages are slightly crumpled, the edges a tad bit torn. She can recite his words by memory, although the writing's worn. He tells of his undying love, and how they were meant to be. Vows whispered at the church, they were her fantasy. But like all things neither tried nor true, They had to be apart. A victim of the ages, he broke her sixth grade heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Adams Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 6:52 PM
I missed this one somehow, but am glad I found it. Very well written!...80)
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July 13, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Thank you, Pat. I see you have updated your account to include a photo of yourself. Nice!
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May 4, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Awwww, the lump starting in Jan's throat just hopped into mine. So sweet and touching, a lovely lump to swallow, for sure. Awwww this. Go in a good Rhoda way ... CayCay
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July 13, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Hi! CayCay...my favorite person on Soup. I love and miss you. Please soup me next time you are "on". I'd love to get caught up.
Taylor Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 8:45 AM
So romantic. I love the feeling it invokes. Thank you for letting me read it!
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:23 PM
...and thank you, Rob, for your friendship on FB. Truly appreciated. You are very kindhearted.
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April 11, 2018 at 11:30 AM
I believe I read this one already on social media, Rhoda. That old love letter shows that the memories of first love are there to stay! Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:22 PM
...the memory and his name still swirls my brain..his name is David Schu (ending of name left off to protect the "innocent" Lol)
Thomas Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Awww Rhoda a sad first loss. A beautiful write!
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, FJ. I swear i answered this comment before, but my response is missing. Sooooooo...here goes...THANK YOU!
Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 2:40 PM
It's very painful growing up so much heartache ,you get stronger but you never forget. Happy Easter. Tom
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Okay...wait just a second. I could have sworn I replied to this comment...I think they disappear sometimes. Happy Easter, Dear...again...
One Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Oh a love letter that reflects a sad ending.. Well expressed Rhoda.. nice flow to your poem..
Tripp Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, Silent One. I appreciate your friendship.
Pandit Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:23 AM
This is heartbreaking but delightful at the same time. Cherished memories reside for ever, as you so well depicted..a sweet poem!
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March 31, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate you stopping in and taking time to read and comment. Do find me on facebook.
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:19 AM
aww Rhoda I have a lump in my throat reading your poem ...the innocence of youth and failed romance - but those letters are precious along with memories.:-) hugs jan xx
Tripp Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, Sweetheart...I like evoking a lump, Lol. I consider it a success. Yes...those letters are precious.
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