Love Leaves You Vulnerable

Your shield, pieced by the sting of betrayal, your fears get exposed for all to see. And reason races through the gauntlet of choices available; each a dagger piercing your heart. You woke from a dream composed of reality defused with imagination; whereas love was tentative yet so precious, as to awe you with its beauty; and scare you with its fragility. You poured out your soul and cried aloud over the pain that love had unleashed. What was left unsaid were empty words, there were no simple answers. Once love was hot, passionate, and on fire, but that degree of love leaves you vulnerable; like a moth to a flame. The moth cannot help being a moth with all its faults and desires; while the flame cannot be anything other than a flame. And so, the meeting of the two, although spectacular, is short-lived. Like a moth to fire's flame, he seduced you with the beauty of his words, and you fell prey to their magic, only to realize that love was but an illusion; destined to disappear.
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Date: 6/1/2019 7:22:00 PM
Wow! The sad beauty of the emotional outpouring is as captivating as it is soul-baring. Such poignancy, pain and passion is expressed in this lost love gem, Emile. Simply superb! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2019 7:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, your words honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/30/2019 3:45:00 PM
Such a fabulous poem, Emile:-) Congratulations on your win,
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Date: 5/30/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2019 2:14:00 AM
This poem has such depth of pain that the emotions are almost palpable Emile. It's sadness profound. Congratulations on your deserving second placement. xxoo
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Date: 4/25/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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