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Love Jones

Love jones, love jones. I’ve got a love jones for that guy. Obsessing over him both day and night am I, Visualizing him with me, we’re flying in the sky. Effervescent I’d be feeling (were it true). I’d be on a high! Jazzy music playing – we’d next be dancing slow, Only he and I together in a sensual tango. No one else is on my mind. Oh, I want him so! Every little thing about him makes my fondness grow. Sugared kisses from that sweet boy - how I wish I’d come to know.

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/6/2023 8:46:00 AM

This has such a light airy feel very nice thoughts on romance. love phyl

Ink Empress

Date: 12/4/2023 7:47:00 AM

I knew this would score high dear andrea, congratulations on your well deserved win. You always know what sponsors need

Karen Jones

Date: 12/3/2023 1:56:00 PM

Andrea congrats on your trophy win for this charming acrostic. Thanks for entering my first contest!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/3/2023 2:12:00 PM

Really?? Wow, what a wonderful surprise

Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 10:22:00 PM

Very romantic, Acrostic poetry, my friend. Romance seems to be in the air up in Utah. Happy Sunday! Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/30/2023 11:14:00 PM

Damn the bones of Jones..' And what would Joe make of this? LOL))) Women...'And down Below is see various other females fancying.' Poetry soup it seems is a hotbed of well I Won't say..' I am most miffed indeed! this will Reqiure major sucking up..!! LOL)) I hope i got You laughing Andrea.? On old bonsy...? Just Kidding.'

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/30/2023 12:20:00 PM

Dreamy wishes fall like pennies into a wishing well in this acrostic, Andrea! It is one of my favorite poetic forms that you do justice to with this loveliness! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you.

James Peranteau

Date: 11/30/2023 10:50:00 AM

Such the exciting write dear poet! Have a great day Andrea....much love, james

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/30/2023 10:11:00 AM

This is so lovely dear Andrea and a very clever acrostic. Very creative. So sweet to read and enjoy just like the ‘ sugared kisses’. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles to you :):)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/30/2023 5:16:00 AM

Mmm…wonderfully tantalizing! Hugs ~ Kim

Karen Croft

Date: 11/29/2023 7:40:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Very creative!

Paige Hind

Date: 11/29/2023 3:50:00 PM

I enjoyed this, lol... very lively and cute! I had to search "love jones"- I think I get it. :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/29/2023 3:43:00 PM

Wonderful! Highly relatable. Pangie. XxxxX

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/29/2023 3:22:00 PM

a touching and romantic poem, Andrea! It also seemed a bit whimsical and light. I especially liked these lines: Every little thing about him makes my fondness grow. Sugared kisses from that sweet boy - how I wish I’d come to know.Sugared kisses is just the best imagery! Liked it...have a splendid evening, Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/29/2023 1:02:00 PM

Playful and cute, Andrea. Made me smile:)

David Williams

Date: 11/29/2023 11:34:00 AM

Hi Andrea, just stopping by.....

Silent One

Date: 11/29/2023 11:05:00 AM

A creative take on the poem.. sweet and romantic...

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2023 10:44:00 AM

This sounds like a beautiful romantic chorus so catchy and has a stunning cadence. And the flow of your words it almost unnoticeable that this is an acrostic. How clever and creative of you andrea. Love it: as always a light and touching take

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/29/2023 9:40:00 AM

Sweet smooth sugared romance poem!

Jay Narain

Date: 11/29/2023 9:23:00 AM

Very romantic.