Love Jones

Love jones, love jones. I’ve got a love jones for that guy.
Obsessing over him both day and night am I,
Visualizing him with me, we’re flying in the sky.
Effervescent I’d be feeling (were it true). I’d be on a high!

Jazzy music playing – we’d next be dancing slow,
Only he and I together in a sensual tango.
No one else is on my mind. Oh, I want him so!
Every little thing about him makes my fondness grow.
Sugared kisses from that sweet boy - how I wish I’d come to know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Babcock Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:46 AM
This has such a light airy feel very nice thoughts on romance. love phyl
Empress Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:47 AM
I knew this would score high dear andrea, congratulations on your well deserved win. You always know what sponsors need
Jones Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Andrea congrats on your trophy win for this charming acrostic. Thanks for entering my first contest!
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Really?? Wow, what a wonderful surprise
Baker Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 10:22 PM
Very romantic, Acrostic poetry, my friend. Romance seems to be in the air up in Utah. Happy Sunday! Bill
Maverick Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:14 PM
Damn the bones of Jones..' And what would Joe make of this? LOL))) Women...'And down Below is see various other females fancying.' Poetry soup it seems is a hotbed of well I Won't say..' I am most miffed indeed! this will Reqiure major sucking up..!! LOL)) I hope i got You laughing Andrea.? On old bonsy...? Just Kidding.'
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Dreamy wishes fall like pennies into a wishing well in this acrostic, Andrea! It is one of my favorite poetic forms that you do justice to with this loveliness! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you.
Peranteau Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Such the exciting write dear poet! Have a great day Andrea....much love, james
Bowring Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 10:11 AM
This is so lovely dear Andrea and a very clever acrostic. Very creative. So sweet to read and enjoy just like the ‘ sugared kisses’. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Mmm…wonderfully tantalizing! Hugs ~ Kim
Croft Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Good luck in the contest. Very creative!
Hind Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 3:50 PM
I enjoyed this, lol... very lively and cute! I had to search "love jones"- I think I get it. :)
Romios Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Wonderful! Highly relatable. Pangie. XxxxX
Turner Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Playful and cute, Andrea. Made me smile:)
Williams Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Hi Andrea, just stopping by.....
One Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:05 AM
A creative take on the poem.. sweet and romantic...
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:44 AM
This sounds like a beautiful romantic chorus so catchy and has a stunning cadence. And the flow of your words it almost unnoticeable that this is an acrostic. How clever and creative of you andrea. Love it: as always a light and touching take
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:40 AM
Sweet smooth sugared romance poem!
Narain Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Very romantic.
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