Love Is Not Known Premiere Contest Winner

Love is not known and 
can never be known, for 
love cannot be weighed
like bullion or flour, 
love cannot be roped: 
a wild mustang running
free, never tethered, 
never corralled, freer 
than the North Wind....

Love has its own mind: 
it comes when it comes, 
will not hear entreaties, 
will not beg its bread...
for love rules all worlds 
and love soaks all life.

Love is a gangster, 
obeying no laws, 
taking what it wants.
And love is a priest, 
making holy life's dirt, 
redeeming then the 
wreckage of hope by 
pouring its holy water, 
quenching all longing.

Love is a magician, 
appearing in two hearts 
at once, transforming 
the beast into a man, 
a girl into a woman: 
an alchemist always
changing lead into gold....

And love can never die. 
When the heart it holds 
beats its last beat, then 
love will soar with soul 
to the next world... 
for love is the only key
that can pry open 
heaven's heavy door.

Love is not known and 
can never be known, 
for love is God,
and God is Love: 
love without end.... 


[rec'd N/A in Brian Strand's 'All Yours' contest, 4/23]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/27/2022 8:25:00 PM
Your fifth stanza resonates with my heart at this time in my life Len. Love can be such an enigma and elusive. If you chase it you may never catch it. But when you patiently wait, it will come to you when you least expect it. I love your poem my friend. Congratulations on your trophy win in the past and on your Second Placement in this contest. Blessings xxoo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/28/2022 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Connie--it's good to hear from you--let's 'talk' soon...
Date: 2/7/2021 10:43:00 AM
Love this LJ! Your images and metaphors are so original and fresh! I like the inclusive form. Many congratulations and blessings my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/7/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I'm glad you like it!
Date: 1/15/2019 1:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Lj. ... interesting reading and beautiful interpretation :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/15/2019 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine, much, much appreciated!
Date: 9/14/2017 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations L.J. on your top win with your amazing write. It's beautifully expressed throughout but you last two stanzas are quite exquisite. A well- deserved first place win!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/15/2017 5:59:00 AM
Ohh yes L.J. I so agree with you! I feel that too. We continue to evolve and appreciate more as we get older - that's the up side! :) I hope you have a lovely day! Susan
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/14/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you Susan--the more years I put on, the more remarkable I find any act of loving, truly loving another, is.
Date: 9/14/2017 7:52:00 PM
Very thoughtful, beautiful and faithful write, LJ - blessings and congrats on your win! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/14/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Greg, I really appreciate it.
Date: 4/27/2016 11:30:00 PM
LEN, NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN... LINDA
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/28/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you, Linda
Date: 4/16/2016 1:18:00 AM
Len C. Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~ :)
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