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. What an exciting and pleasurable experience it was to work with Sandra. Sorta went together like rhythm and rhyme. Thanks to her for her time and patience:)

Love Is, Love Isn't Collaboration with Sandra Weiss

I know the pain that love can bring
How hurtful words can bite and sting
When lies are told, love will take wings
That real love doesn't come with strings

Love, liken to a pendulum swing
Taking it all not giving a thing
Once I listened to my heart sing
When I thought love was everything.

What happens is, that we don't see
Sometimes love's not meant to be
Perhaps there should be a decree,
The lock for love has lost it's key

I found that love was not for me
It brings with it too much debris
Though some will say that love is free
I'd have to say, I disagree.

 
              Sandra Weiss
                  Daniel Turner

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Beryl Edmonds October 4, 2024 at 12:08 PM Lovely poetry Daniel and Sandra, a fabulous collaboration poem… Beryl

Anonomus Scorpio April 28, 2024 at 9:56 AM Very cool collaboration you two! I find it hard enough to get the voices in my head to work together lol ;) You both complimented each others verse with eloquince! Best regards A.S. A fav for me BTW

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2024 at 3:52 AM Congratulations on your poem being on the best new 100 poems' list. Way to go. Wonderful collaboration..Sara K Daniel Turner January 24, 2024 at 3:41 PM Thank you Mrs Sara:) I appreciate you reading and commenting. I sure hope all is well with you. It was a lot of fun collaborating with Sandra.

Shirley Hawkins December 17, 2023 at 5:58 PM WOW! WOW! (One for each of you) A lovely marriage of minds so cleverly written about the thrills and spills of love. I enjoyed reading it, Thank you, Dan and Sandra. Old Duck. Daniel Turner January 1, 2024 at 1:53 AM Thank you, Shirley. Always a pleasure to see you. Happy New Year!

Nancy Kaufman December 11, 2023 at 1:46 PM Hi Daniel, This is a lovely group effort and it flows quite beautifully. I do hope that neither of you actually embrace that sentiment though. Daniel Turner December 11, 2023 at 2:44 PM Thank you, Nancy. Always a pleasure young lady:) Merry Christmas:)

Victor Buhagiar December 6, 2023 at 9:36 PM Smooth collaboration. Daniel Turner December 8, 2023 at 1:11 AM Thank you, Victor. Great to see you again. Merry Christmas old friend:)

Heidi Sands December 6, 2023 at 3:23 PM Wow! This is an excellent Collaboration! Smoothly written together! Congratulations to the both of you. A Fave for me :) Daniel Turner December 8, 2023 at 1:10 AM Thank you, Heidi. I/we appreciate your kind comments and support. Merry Christmas:)

Anne E Sangster - K December 5, 2023 at 1:05 PM Absolutely wonderful collaboration Daniel. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Enjoy your day my friend :-) Daniel Turner December 5, 2023 at 1:16 PM Thank you, Anne:) It was a fun collaboration. I hope life has been treating you kindly and Merry Christmas:)

Charles Messina December 1, 2023 at 2:10 AM I love this collaboration, Daniel. Really nice to see poets working together and creating something special like this. Keep the ink rolling, my friend. Charlie Daniel Turner December 5, 2023 at 10:48 AM Thanks Charlie:) Hoping all is well!

Yann Rolland November 30, 2023 at 11:06 PM so deep, and "interesting" poem, enjoyed your words, and the hommage yann Daniel Turner December 5, 2023 at 10:47 AM Thank you, Yann. Great to see you again. Be well:)

Hilda Greenhough November 30, 2023 at 8:11 PM An interesting, hardtack look at love. It sounds about right. Thanks for the light moment. Daniel Turner December 5, 2023 at 10:47 AM Thank you, Hilda. I appreciate your time and support:) Always happy to see you:)

Eve Roper November 28, 2023 at 9:20 AM It a feeling of love for sure. Love the Collaboration Daniel Turner November 29, 2023 at 1:47 PM Yes it is, Eve. Thank you so much for stopping by. It's always my pleasure:)

Paige Hind November 27, 2023 at 3:13 PM Very heartrending... I'm sorry for the subject of this poem... I enjoyed it, lots of things to think of... Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 3:22 PM Thank you, Paige. For every "ying" there's a "yang". Hard to win a game with no rules. I appreciate your time and support. Great to see you again.

Deb M November 27, 2023 at 12:24 PM Great job to both of you for this delightful love poem! Sounds and appears like you are a good team!! Debx Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 12:32 PM LOL Im not sure she wants to be on my team. I'm too "demanding" Thank you, YL. It was a lot of fun:)

Ilene Bauer November 27, 2023 at 10:17 AM you both did a fabulous job in your collaboration, daniel and sandra! i enjoyed the product of your joint efforts... Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 10:22 AM Thank you, Ilene. It was a lot of fun. She's a mess (fun).

Linda Alice Fowler November 27, 2023 at 7:04 AM Fabulous collaboration Daniel and Sandra! Many sides, ups and downs, and towels thrown down. :) Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 9:49 AM Hello Alice:) Whatever love is, it is not simple, ever. Wonderful to see you this Mon. morning. I hope all is well with you and yours.

Bj Legros Kelley November 27, 2023 at 5:49 AM This was an amazingly well written collaboration! You two did a wonderful job. Love can be so wonderful, and love can hurt, sad but true, but you can't run from love, remember that old song? There's just no place in this world you can hide...! That is one of my favorite songs :) Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 9:48 AM Thank you, BJ. Love is like any other game. You win some, you lose some and some get rained out. Always a pleasure:) Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving with your family:)

Paul Willason November 27, 2023 at 4:59 AM Good duet Daniel....although sad...always like to see love survive and triumph. Can't win em all but as in this case, lost love makes for a fine poem. Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 9:46 AM Thanks Paul. Unfortunately love is no fairy tale. Always great to see you my friend.

Tom Cunningham November 27, 2023 at 12:15 AM You and Sandra collaborate well together, love can be a wonderful thing but sometimes it can be a toxic experience. Tom Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 3:00 AM Thank you, Tom. Love is love, for better or for worse:) Great to see you again.

Lin Lane November 26, 2023 at 5:12 PM A fine collaboration. It’s nice to see you active again. Daniel Turner November 26, 2023 at 5:24 PM Thank you, Lin. It feels good to start writing again. Hope you are having a good day.

Frederic Parker November 26, 2023 at 4:46 PM Nicely done you two, love is like a bee it carries honey, and carries a stinger Daniel Turner November 26, 2023 at 5:23 PM Thank you, Frederic. You are so right, my friend. Always great to see you.