Love Is Like An Ocean

Love is like an ocean,
it holds such mystery,
on the surface it reveals,
everything we can see.

Once you go under,
there are wonders to behold,
and as the years go by so quickly,
many stories can now be told.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/5/2009 5:14:00 AM
So much truth to this write. It has a lovely flow and tone while the descriptive quality is beautiful as well Michael
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Date: 1/3/2009 11:21:00 PM
very beautifully written!!!thanks for the comments and God Bless You and Keep You.....tyesha
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Date: 1/3/2009 5:22:00 PM
treasures of the ocean and the beautiful of its sound and look. love this poetry on a topic i am proud to love, the water. enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 1/3/2009 1:01:00 PM
yes love is like an ocean as you put it here. sometimes it can be too deep. nicely writen. jhl
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Date: 1/3/2009 11:47:00 AM
It certainly is. Deep, mysterious and so beautiful. A wondrous write. Love, shar
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Date: 1/3/2009 10:55:00 AM
well said, love does hold such mystery. great write.- love & peace .-james
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Date: 1/3/2009 10:06:00 AM
I like the comparison, it's strong and usually holds true. Great job. ~Jenny~
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