Love Is In the Air Tonight

Skipping heartbeats in the air
With the warm sun in your voice
In the cozy tipsy room
The pen is restless
 
Pink desires of crimson fruits
Have gone to the dense woodland
To drink wine from the moon cup
The box is greedy
 
Ice on pulsating sweet heat
Flames on slice of valentine
Passionate warmth on your palm
Restless painting brush 
 
A night for crazy casket
A dark time for equine rhythm
Valentine taps on the cheek
It’s time to wake up
 
We all have lyrical pens
In our pink chest bouncing hues
Rich or poor, flames in impulse
To wake up and sleep

Champagne in the stars of night
Wind calling to cross the line 
Tonight is for thine and mine
Valentine freedom
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15/01/2017 : 
"The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables made of of four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respec-tively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.”-PoetrySoup
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Congrats on your win with this romantic write! :)
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Sunita ...
Negron Flores Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest.
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Thank you so much, Nayda for liking and considering ...It is always a pleasure to write for your contest ...
Pennell  Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 6:40 AM
never seen this form before cracking poem and im sure it will do well in the comp congrats stephen
Gupta Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Kannan Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 6:17 AM
This is really so beautiful...It reads like a winner... Great poetry... A 7 ..
Gupta Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Supraja ... probir ...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Intoxicating string of Dodoitsu. A seven for each, dear Probir!
Gupta Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 10:28 PM
love the poem and all the descriptions you have applied to each stanza... If for contest it's a winner already Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Eve for loving the poem that I wrote really fondly ....Probir ...
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 12:31 PM
- A lovely poem, Probir - (Singing in Japanese certainly great :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Anne ... probir
Turner Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 10:28 AM
I love the references to the "pen" I really love this lyrical poem, Probir:)
Gupta Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Daniel ... probir
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