Deirdre Omaidin Poet Senryu

Love Is In the Air

Your eyes light my world
touch the cockles of my heart
pulse me with desire.

Your touch makes me want
like a thirst in a desert
quench me with thy lips.

Your lingering scent
Like a spring scented blossom
draws me closer, awwww.




entry for sentimental synru
Linda-Marie sweetheart of P.S. sponsored

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Beata Agustin October 17, 2024 at 8:31 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 1:07 PM DEIRDRE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 6, 2015 at 1:16 PM DEIRDRE, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:41 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Deirdre. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 21, 2011 at 10:44 AM Awww, that last line sure made me smile ^_^ no kidding! Super congrats on your win here-- this is really sweet and romantic :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 18, 2011 at 4:31 PM This was well worth the high placement Deirdre as it was exactly what was wanted for the theme of my contest.. hope u will continue to enter them..luv..happy weekend..

Nette Onclaud February 18, 2011 at 8:31 AM awwwh! loving every line that oozes with sensual charm, deidre... thanks for stopping by; so touched! :) huggs, nette

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:03 AM Many Congrats Deirdre for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:38 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Deirdre. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:35 PM Almost felt like I was encroaching on a love scene there, Deirdre. Awesome win congratulations

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 1:58 PM One of the ones that most incites feeling from its imagery. Very nice, and congratulations.

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 11:05 AM Very passionate Senryu.Congrats Deirdre on your big win in this contest of Linda---kashinath

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:40 AM Hello Deirdre, Lovely, so full of love and passion Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on your very fine 3rd Place Win in the contest, Deirdre! Heart touching and so very sweet! Love, Annalise

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 7:04 PM Deirdre, Congratulations on your worthy place at the top. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 6:32 PM Sweet, sweet, sweet. All three senryu entries here are well written. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:49 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Deirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:29 PM Congrats Deirdre on your success in my contest luv.. your entry blew me away ..thankxx for your support ....

Kash Poet February 14, 2011 at 2:21 AM Wonderful Senryu you have penned Deirdre---Enjoyed---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta February 13, 2011 at 4:18 PM Enjoyed the multiple haiku with sentiments, Deirdre

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2011 at 3:21 PM Yet another wonderful sentimental haiku for Linda's contest. Good luc, Deirdre and good afternoon!