Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Personification

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July 14, 2023

Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Love Is Blind

Rain, Rain, what an awesome blessing you are! 
Waiting fervently, finally you're here!
All I need an umbrella, 
To meet my dearest fella,
And a pair of solid boots which go far! 

jillion puddles wouldn’t stop headstrong me, 
Darling boy I will definitely see,
Crazy we are, both love rain!
Who cares drizzle, not a pain,
Splendifarious rain! reason for glee! 

Pure Love is blind and foolish, isn't that true?
Can’t wait to be with him, for sky of blue!
Rain or shine, I must see him,
Aren’t we the amazing team? 
Love, I am truly dying to meet You!


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Valsa George July 24, 2023 at 8:12 PM This is equally entertaining and delighting ! A beautiful story poem, highlighting the the driving force of love. Congratulations, Mala !

Eve Roper July 24, 2023 at 8:10 PM Congratulations on your win, Malabika, even a chick needs his galoshes. Love the verse.

Christuraj Alex July 24, 2023 at 5:39 AM You have a minutely fine way of writing. This is an example of one such. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury July 24, 2023 at 6:12 AM Thank you, Chris. Your encouraging comments inspire me to write. Best wishes, always ~ Mala

Len Gasun July 24, 2023 at 4:12 AM This is a delightful and creative story limerick my dear poet friend. I love and enjoyed it a lot. Congratulations on yur win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury July 24, 2023 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Dear Len. So delighted to see your beautiful comment! Hugs ~ Mala

Terry Miller July 24, 2023 at 2:10 AM Oh I love this little poem, congratulations Malabika Ray Choudhury July 24, 2023 at 4:48 AM Thank you, Dear Terry. Glad you liked this limerick!

Darlene De Beaulieu July 14, 2023 at 10:55 AM Hello Mala, a lovely poem. good luck in the contest. Love & Friendship /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu July 15, 2023 at 5:04 AM Hello Mala, A sickness in the family! I hope it is not serious. We will talk later. Friendship & Love /Darlene\ Malabika Ray Choudhury July 14, 2023 at 4:26 PM I am okay, Darlene. A bit busy with sickness in the family, and also working on a book of translations. Love, Dear Friend..hope you are enjoying summer! Darlene De Beaulieu July 14, 2023 at 3:54 PM Hello Mala, How are you? I hope all is well with you. You are welcome my friend. Love &Friendship /Darlene\ Malabika Ray Choudhury July 14, 2023 at 1:01 PM Thanks, Darlene. Appreciate your visit and comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2023 at 7:21 AM - Mala, best wishes in the contest with this lovely and cute poem :) - hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury July 14, 2023 at 7:25 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I couldn't but write a limerick with this awesome picture!