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Love Is Actually Trusting You

Time is witness to fidelity of man.
Even arranged marriage is that successful.
Never thought I am your ideal woman.
In union we virgins, vowed to be faithful.

Honoring promises of love for lifespan,
We stand even today, hand in hand; praiseful.
On the path of life, we followed each other 
Sensing a need unknown to one another.



5/08/17
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Beejadhur Sewumber Date: 11/3/2017 2:59:00 AM Idealism is nonexistent. Beautiful poem that makes us realize reality. Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 11/4/2017 12:35:00 AM Idealism is not alien to humanity....just reverting back to being simply humane makes it better for ev1. :) Sunita

Faraz Ajmal Date: 8/19/2017 11:47:00 AM Such a beautiful poem about love, no love is perfect, everything has it s advantages and downfalls, you just have to make it perfect for you and your partner and totally ignore what other says, yeah it s a fact that even arrange mariages last longer than love, but it all depends on the other person and the understanding between both of you, very beautifully written Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/19/2017 12:23:00 PM Thanks Faraz. Glad you devoted your time to share your thoughts which I find valuable. Agree with you. A relation whether by marriage or not is pure when it holds respect and trust. Alas...I wish society could be re-invented to sustain this. :D Sunita

Alesia Leach Date: 8/13/2017 1:44:00 PM Beautifully written Good Luck in the contest! Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/17/2017 1:16:00 AM Thanks dear friend for stopping to read. Glad you appreciate. All the best, :) Sunita

Akkina Downing Date: 8/7/2017 9:00:00 AM So true, "love is actually trusting" you wrote it so beautifully :) Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/7/2017 10:53:00 AM Thanks Akkina for the visit and for leaving such lovely words. All the best dear friend. Regs Sunita :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2017 7:51:00 PM This is very interesting to me, Sunita. So you have this kind of marriage? did you hear of the new movie about the Pakistani who went to the US and his parents could not get him to go for an arranged marriage? This made me think of that movie. It's called the big Sick. A really great movie. I love how you did the theme of this contest. Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/6/2017 1:40:00 PM Oh ya Andrea, arranged marriage were rejected at a time by youth but nowadays it is being revived but without the orthodox part and it has its advantage. Thanks for the visit and nice comment my dear friend. :) Regs Sunita

Paul Callus Date: 8/5/2017 9:49:00 AM Love and trust go hand in hand, Sunita. I am sure that arranged marriages come with mixed results. Regards // paul Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/5/2017 11:47:00 AM Agree with you my friend.Thanks for the encouraging comment and visit. Regs Sunita

Maria Williams Date: 8/5/2017 9:05:00 AM Love is Trust, this is so true Sunita. I really enjoyed this, you say it as it is...Maria Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/5/2017 11:46:00 AM Thanks Maria, your visits are so much appreciated. Your comment is so inspiring. Hugs Sunita :))

Probir Gupta Date: 8/5/2017 5:17:00 AM Sounds nice ... Enjoyed reading ... the last line is wonderful not only for the alliteration but its depth and the beautiful context as well ... Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/5/2017 5:44:00 AM Thanks dear friend for stopping to scrutinise and give such an encouraging comment. GL Sunita :)

Winged Warrior Date: 8/5/2017 1:40:00 AM Very nicely penned Sunita...a great rispetto my friend...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/5/2017 3:16:00 AM Thanks WW. Your visit and comment is most appreciated. GL :) Sunita