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Love Is Actually Nebulous

Love is such an ambiguous emotion
Cloudy as a storm darkened sky in July
To many it brings comfort and devotion
To others, it's the reason why their eyes cry
A nebulous mind hasn't the slightest notion
that hearts are treacherous and will even lie
in its yearning to find passion and desire
Love is a spark, but if lost, will douse a fire


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August 1st, 2017
Love is actually...
Contest of John Anderson

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2017

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Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/18/2017 10:13:00 PM A passionate write and exquisite words for love! Congrats on the high place win! :) Sunita Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/27/2017 10:09:00 AM Thanks ever so much, Sunita.

Susan Ashley Date: 8/18/2017 5:56:00 PM Congratulations on your win Lin! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/18/2017 6:06:00 PM I'm grateful for your congrats, Susan.

Jan Allison Date: 8/18/2017 3:13:00 PM what a superb rispetto i am sorry i missed reading this before Lin, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/18/2017 6:04:00 PM now you haven't missed a thing. Thanks, Jan.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 8/18/2017 2:24:00 PM Congrats on your win, Lin! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/18/2017 6:03:00 PM Thanks a bunch, Dale.

Darren White Date: 8/2/2017 9:41:00 AM Wonderful rispetto, Lin. Your final line is a regular gem. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Darren White Date: 8/2/2017 10:11:00 AM :D you're welcome. Lin Lane Date: 8/2/2017 10:07:00 AM Thank you for so many things, Darren, as well as serving as my editor today. ;-)

Winged Warrior Date: 8/2/2017 4:50:00 AM A very nebulous verse my dear lady lol...love can be like being lost in a cloud...great write Lin...as always...^WW^ Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/2/2017 8:12:00 AM Thanks very much, WW.

Russell Sivey Date: 8/1/2017 3:50:00 PM What a brilliantly inspired write my friend! You have certainly written a well penned poem here Lin, I enjoyed reading it this awesome day! You have made an exceptional piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/2/2017 8:10:00 AM Thank you, Russell.

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 8/1/2017 2:46:00 PM a super piece so well penned Lin, indeed love is such a thing of various emotions. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/2/2017 8:10:00 AM Thank you very much, Gordon.