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Love Is Actually Nebulous

Love is such an ambiguous emotion
Cloudy as a storm darkened sky in July
To many it brings comfort and devotion
To others, it's the reason why their eyes cry
A nebulous mind hasn't the slightest notion
that hearts are treacherous and will even lie
in its yearning to find passion and desire
Love is a spark, but if lost, will douse a fire


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August 1st, 2017
Love is actually...
Contest of John Anderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:13 PM
A passionate write and exquisite words for love! Congrats on the high place win! :) Sunita
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Thanks ever so much, Sunita.
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your win Lin!
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:06 PM
I'm grateful for your congrats, Susan.
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:13 PM
what a superb rispetto i am sorry i missed reading this before Lin, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:04 PM
now you haven't missed a thing. Thanks, Jan.
Cozart Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Congrats on your win, Lin!
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Thanks a bunch, Dale.
White Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Wonderful rispetto, Lin. Your final line is a regular gem. Good luck in the contest.
White Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:11 AM
:D you're welcome.
Lane Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Thank you for so many things, Darren, as well as serving as my editor today. ;-)
Warrior Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:50 AM
A very nebulous verse my dear lady lol...love can be like being lost in a cloud...great write Lin...as always...^WW^
Lane Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thanks very much, WW.
Sivey Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:50 PM
What a brilliantly inspired write my friend! You have certainly written a well penned poem here Lin, I enjoyed reading it this awesome day! You have made an exceptional piece, Great Work!!
Lane Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thank you, Russell.
Mcconnell Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 2:46 PM
a super piece so well penned Lin, indeed love is such a thing of various emotions.
Lane Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thank you very much, Gordon.
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