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Love between the two of us is a rhythmic dance, a romance in the most sensual and subtle prelude we are wooed. We share amorous flirting without need for words asserting our intentions but sparked by an ember as we remember our yearning and burning flames of fire, the wanton desire. The nights spent together in love's passion, and the fashion of your whispers on my nape, calling my name as you claim me as your own. Our hearts beating in sync as one, and none I've ever known made me feel completely sated. We're fated to be together without a reason to sever our love. Forever will we share the last dance, the last kiss, making love like this.

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Date: 12/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
Lin, you describe romantic love the way it should feel like. If it doesn't, then it's not the real thing. People could use this as a guide to see if they really feel the way they say they do! You certainly can create a lot of passion with words! Smiles!
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Date: 12/17/2024 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Duke. N/A'd but your comments are better than a contest win because I value your opinion.
Date: 12/6/2024 4:14:00 PM
I love poems about love, romance, and the passion of the dance... all are in this poem dear poet...good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/7/2024 12:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Frederic.
Date: 12/6/2024 10:40:00 AM
Fire, passion and romance in two stanzas, you're quite the romantic Lin. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/6/2024 12:13:00 PM
ah, the heart of a romantic is a betrayer of the mind, Tom. Cliche's abound, but nothing else matters when a heart sets out to get what it wants. Thanks.

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