Love is a Funny-Smelling Thing

     If bathtubs grew onions
       then feet might have bunions
     that stink as well as get sore
  
     If you can't remove all the dirt
       your toes will sure hurt ~
         that your husband
         will ignore as he snores
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George Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 1:10 AM
Interesting observations in the typical Gershon style. :)
Brotherton Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 11:01 AM
An interesting observation my friend. Did you get your inspiration from first-hand experience?
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Your funny side is showing. Thanks for the laugh. Have a blessed/wonderful ~ day/weekend..............
M  Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Hehe….or as your wife snores!! Funny one BB! Debx
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