Love In the Woods

The intensely delightful world of super young love
Hides from the naïive lover a glimpse or a clue
Of their amorous amour’s essence perfectly true.
 
The mighty forest elf watches with eyes that are true.
Sending these youngsters an abundance of pure love,
Gleaning their obvious affection, smiles a clue.
 
Faerie queen came up to the surface, with her own clue
Following up on possibilities pure and true?
The forest elf smiled at his own true mighty love.
 
What they are in for next, they surely have not a clue…
 
 
Written 2-11-2019
Contest:  A Tritina                        Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/25/2019 5:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Caren. Well done.
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:27:00 PM
many congrats Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:40:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/24/2019 4:05:00 PM
You did a great job on this, Caren. Nicely written and very well done. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:41:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. I am honored my friend. Truly.
Date: 2/13/2019 11:43:00 AM
So true. Nicely written.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/13/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thank you DM. I doubt I will write many Tritina's. This was not easy.
Date: 2/12/2019 6:24:00 PM
A great Valentine's Day Tritina; Good luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/12/2019 6:45:00 PM
Luckily, Nina found something I had missed and l let me know what it was and I fixed it. If you have questions about this style, she is the expert. This is the ONLY one I have ever done.
Date: 2/12/2019 3:51:00 PM
It is an interesting type of writing. Good job. I wish you luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/12/2019 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Bette. I had never tried one of these before.
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