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Love In The Woods

The intensely delightful world of super young love
Hides from the naïive lover a glimpse or a clue
Of their amorous amour’s essence perfectly true.
 
The mighty forest elf watches with eyes that are true.
Sending these youngsters an abundance of pure love,
Gleaning their obvious affection, smiles a clue.
 
Faerie queen came up to the surface, with her own clue
Following up on possibilities pure and true?
The forest elf smiled at his own true mighty love.
 
What they are in for next, they surely have not a clue…
 
 
Written 2-11-2019
Contest:  A Tritina                        Sponsor: Charles Messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/13/2019 11:43:00 AM
So true. Nicely written.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/13/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thank you DM. I doubt I will write many Tritina's. This was not easy.
Date: 2/12/2019 6:24:00 PM
A great Valentine's Day Tritina; Good luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/12/2019 6:45:00 PM
Luckily, Nina found something I had missed and l let me know what it was and I fixed it. If you have questions about this style, she is the expert. This is the ONLY one I have ever done.
Date: 2/12/2019 3:51:00 PM
It is an interesting type of writing. Good job. I wish you luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/12/2019 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Bette. I had never tried one of these before.
Date: 2/12/2019 1:07:00 PM
I was wondering whether it was possible to write a tritina which didn’t sound weird. You have demonstrated that it’s more than possible! I like this whimsical take on the contest!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/12/2019 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Nina. I had to really THINK about this one before I began. It was a bit of a struggle. I am glad that you liked it. I had never tried a tritina before.