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Love In the Sea

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Young we be, more fish In the sea, then old tells us, Tales, theirs more like whales.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/9/2019 10:11:00 AM

An interesting effect this one has on the listener/reader. (Nothing fishy about it either). Nicely depicted, written, and voiced, William. Happy Thursday, Gershon

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/9/2019 10:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Gershon my friend, Aloha @wk

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2019 3:20:00 PM

I like the rhyming effect in this one. It was interesting to hear your voice!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/8/2019 7:32:00 PM

Very kind of you Andrea, and an early (Hau'oli la Makuahine--translation: Happy Day, Mother) 'Happy Mother's Day', to you and yours, Aloha William...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2019 3:17:00 PM

ohh, this warm poem made my day complete... very nice,william.. h'oponopono!...huggs

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/8/2019 7:26:00 PM

Likewise, ho'oponopono, to you too, much appreciated! Aloha William...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/8/2019 8:29:00 AM

Hello William, so nice to meet you. Thank ou for this lovely poem. I had a nice chuckle to start my day. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/8/2019 12:18:00 PM

Hello William, than you somuch. have a nice day my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/8/2019 8:39:00 AM

It is very nice of you to say such kindness simply overwhelms, an early 'Happy's Mother's Day' to you Darlene, Aloha William...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/8/2019 7:21:00 AM

Quite funny! Back in high school (ahem..way back) I was having a bad moment.so my mom say, “There are more fish in the boat” (yes, she got the saying wrong) so I say, “Yeah, mom, and they’re all dead.”

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/8/2019 7:30:00 AM

Hehe, thanks, btw, now that you mentioned it, 'Happy Mother's Day', Aloha William...