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Love In the Sea

Young we be, more fish

In the sea, then old tells us,

Tales, theirs more like whales.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 10:11 AM
An interesting effect this one has on the listener/reader. (Nothing fishy about it either). Nicely depicted, written, and voiced, William. Happy Thursday, Gershon
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Thank you so much Gershon my friend, Aloha @wk
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:20 PM
I like the rhyming effect in this one. It was interesting to hear your voice!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Very kind of you Andrea, and an early (Hau'oli la Makuahine--translation: Happy Day, Mother) 'Happy Mother's Day', to you and yours, Aloha William...
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Hello William, so nice to meet you. Thank ou for this lovely poem. I had a nice chuckle to start my day. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Hello William, than you somuch. have a nice day my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:39 AM
It is very nice of you to say such kindness simply overwhelms, an early 'Happy's Mother's Day' to you Darlene, Aloha William...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Quite funny! Back in high school (ahem..way back) I was having a bad moment.so my mom say, “There are more fish in the boat” (yes, she got the saying wrong) so I say, “Yeah, mom, and they’re all dead.”
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Hehe, thanks, btw, now that you mentioned it, 'Happy Mother's Day', Aloha William...
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