Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

Love In the Moonlight

Love in the Moonlight

Rhinestone studded midnight
weaves its magic thread.
Under silver moonlight,
hearts to love are led.
 
Burning passions unchained,
we fuse with the sky. 
Frenzied, fulfilled, undrained,
in love’s heat, we lie. 

Blazing, dazzling, sizzling, 
flames of love burn bright.
Sighing softly, fizzling  
gently…love's delight.
 
Under silver moonlight 
hearts to love are led.
Rhinestone studded midnight
weaves its magic thread.

02-14-2018

Contest:      88 Syllables
Sponsor:     Joseph Mays
Placement:   1st

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Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2019 at 7:22 PM how interesting. Just the other day I commented to your short version for Greg's contest, and looking for a new poem of yours to comment to, I fell right down the page to THIS One, the original from whence you took your little poem. I love this, and I see you repeated the short verse for Greg's contest at the beginning and the end of this poem. WEll done! Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2019 at 7:28 PM Awwww! Thank you so very much, Andie! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

John Michaels November 15, 2018 at 11:42 AM Wonderful write, Pandita - "blazing, dazzling, sizzling" is so true ;) All the best, John. Pandita Sietesantos November 17, 2018 at 4:03 PM Thank you - thank you, dear John! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita

Al Juman August 18, 2018 at 9:38 PM Pandita, Pandita I need not so more as I feel the heat in the blazing, sizzling flames of love. Love you sweetheart Pandita Sietesantos August 19, 2018 at 3:21 PM Hi my dear Al, it is always a pleasure to receive your wonderful compliments. Many thanks, my sweet friend! Hugs and love. Pandita

Karen Da July 2, 2018 at 5:10 PM How I just love the moon. This poem is so beautiful, as beautiful as the moon. Very nice.. Pandita Sietesantos July 3, 2018 at 2:50 PM Hi Karen, thank you my friend for your oh so lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita

Line Gauthier April 9, 2018 at 6:42 PM Back with congrats, Pandita. Superbly done. Pandita Sietesantos April 9, 2018 at 7:29 PM Thank you - thank you, dear Line! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper March 15, 2018 at 9:51 PM Wonderful imagery in your poem, Pandita, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Pandita Sietesantos April 9, 2018 at 7:30 PM Dear Eve, thank you my friend for your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Blessings and love. Pandita

Gregory Richard Barden March 15, 2018 at 9:34 PM Stunning imagery and story! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Pandita - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3 Pandita Sietesantos April 13, 2018 at 10:41 AM Thank you - thank you, dear Greg! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong March 14, 2018 at 5:13 PM You composed this brilliantly Pandita! I love the way you began and ended this just switching the lines. This is awesome and very deserving of your wonderful First Placement! This is going into my Faves my friend! xxoo : ) Pandita Sietesantos March 15, 2018 at 9:09 AM Hi Connie, I hope you are doing well, my friend! Your comments and compliments always mean a lot to me. I continue to learn so much from poets of your caliber! Thank you! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2018 at 1:00 PM - I enjoy this romantic poem, Pandita :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest - Well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Pandita Sietesantos March 14, 2018 at 1:16 PM Dear Anne-Lise, it is a pleasure to receive your kind complimentary words! I am so glad you enjoyed reading this piece! Hope you are having a beautiful day with lots of sunhsine! Hugs. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams March 3, 2018 at 7:52 PM Well done. Very passionately said, and told. Pandita Sietesantos March 3, 2018 at 11:40 PM Hi Ronald, thank you for your continued support and lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu February 27, 2018 at 10:32 AM Hello Pandita,under the moonlight is where the lovers are. I like this poem you have written. A beautiful poem. have a ni e day my friend. Pandita Sietesantos February 27, 2018 at 11:22 AM Dear Darlene, thank you my friend for your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Blessings and love. Pandita

Sara Kendrick February 22, 2018 at 5:22 AM Ahh!! This one has good rhythm, flow and rhyme. I especially enjoyed the repeat stanza. Reading it brought thoughts of love. Thanks for stopping by. Sara Pandita Sietesantos February 26, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thank you dear Sara for your very sweet compliments that I truly appreciate! Hope you are enjoying a very lovely day! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Gregory Richard Barden February 18, 2018 at 9:32 AM Yes! My favorite muses - the moon and passion - I loved this read, Pandita - another celestial inspiration and lyrical gem! Blessings! :-) Pandita Sietesantos February 18, 2018 at 9:58 AM Hi Greg, thank you my friend for visiting and leaving your lovely compliments that mean a lot to me. I am happy you enjoyed the read. Kindest regards and best wishes. Pandita

CayCay Godwin February 16, 2018 at 8:32 AM I enjoyed your poem - well crafted and romantic, you conveyed much in short, crisp lines. All the best to you ... CayCay Pandita Sietesantos February 16, 2018 at 9:39 AM Hi CayCay, it is a pleasure to receive your kind complimentary words! I am so glad you enjoyed reading this piece! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Freddie Robinson Jr. February 15, 2018 at 4:48 PM WoW! This romantic flame is caliente sizzling hot, Pandita. So good to see you again, my dear friend. And you brought the fuego heat w/you on V-Day. This is a love fire starter for sure. Mighty fine poetry. Aurora bright write. Love and best wishes for the new year. Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 8:03 PM Thank you - thank you, Freddie!! Hope all is well with you, my friend and please accept my best wishes for a wonderful 2018 as well! I appreciate the love and support that is so inspirational! Have a great weekend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley February 14, 2018 at 8:26 PM Dear Pandita, love and passion dance with hot romance under the moonlight in your enchanting and enticing poem. I enjoyed your ardent imagery that glowed with fiery allure. A scrumptious write my lovely friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 1:45 PM My dear incomparable, poet friend, it is always a pleasure to hear from you! Your responses are as poetic as your wonderful body of work! Just beautiful! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Line Gauthier February 14, 2018 at 4:43 PM Lovely, Pandita. Hot and delicious. Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 1:40 PM Ooooooh! I always love hearing from you dear Line. Thank you for your continued support and lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Vijay Pandit February 14, 2018 at 3:03 PM Love shines throughout your poem..love that last stanza..well articulated romantic feelings. Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 1:40 PM Hi Vijay, thank you my friend for visiting and leaving your sweet compliments that mean a lot to me. Kindest regards and best wishes. Pandita

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 3:02 PM Hi Pandita, This poem is so beautiful and romantic. Excellent imagery as well. It's so fitting for Valentine's Day. Happy Valentine's Day my friend:-) Alexis Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 1:36 PM Thank you so very much, dear Alexis, I hope your Valentine's Day was exciting and happy! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 2:39 PM A poem full of romantic and passionate words.. Stunning imagery, what else would lovers wish for... Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 1:35 PM My friend, I am extremely flattered by your sweet words - always inspiring and always encouraging! Hugs. Pandita

Jan Allison February 14, 2018 at 2:00 PM what super romantic imagery Pandita I love the idea of rhinestone studded midnight - I'll look out for it when i go walking in the moonlight:-0 hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 1:30 PM Oh Jan, thank you so much for your wonderful complimentary words that always mean the world to me! Hope you and yours are doing well, my friend! Best wishes and blessings always to you. Love and hugs. Pandita