Love In the Clouds

If mountains had hearts, will they flirt with the flippant clouds?

(a one-liner poem)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:56 PM
lovely poem. LINDA
A  Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 6:36 PM
RAVINDRAN, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
Kimathi Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Beautiful, beautiful imagery created here! Congrats for your placement Ravindran! ;-)
Manghat Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 2:19 AM
Thanks a lot Teddy
Tanwar Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:46 AM
nice think sir
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:51 AM
Thanks Manu
Merryman Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 10:16 PM
This is cute, Ravindran! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:51 AM
Thank you, Kim
Hart Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:16 PM
I live and love in the mountains. I so love your one line. I wrote it in a card and placed beside my bed. Congrats on your win.
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Oh, I'm flattered... Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 6:43 PM
cute one. Loved the alliteration at the end.
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Oh, yeah. Thank you. It just sort of clicked!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations Ravindran.
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Thank you Nayda
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:19 PM
lovely poem congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Thank you Jan. Btw, how do I know I'm the winner?
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Ravindran.. ..Lovely win.... Love Skat
Manghat Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:27 AM
A very funny question. How do I know I'm the winner? I'm quite bemused here (help me!)
Ebbs Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Cute, congrats!
Manghat Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Thank you, Ed
Nance Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:47 AM
I enjoyed your one liner, well done.
Manghat Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Thank you, Casarah
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:44 AM
this is a good one!! -lu *smiles*
Manghat Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Thank you
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