Love In Sail

love me once i love you twice if you fail then im gonna sail onto the rail i took the pledge to love as of you we promiced to be ones only soul  your my true love my one and only love if in doubt im without your my home for im alone so please lets make it right for you make me fly like a kite im yours forever in the hours we spend apart come to me and let me hum to you !
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August 27, 2011 at 12:04 AM
welcome to the soup.. a very intense poem... hope to see you post lots more ...have yourself a very nice night~p.d.
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August 26, 2011 at 9:10 PM
Creative expressions on the feelings of love, connie
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August 26, 2011 at 8:22 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Connie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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August 26, 2011 at 12:29 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv...
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