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Love In Rotgut Saloon

Geez fella won’t you look at me, I’ve got my best frock on. My girdles tight, my bosom heaves and I’m stuck here ‘til mornin’. You’re welcome in this Rotgut bar, but kid you heed my warnin’, git rid that ol’ ten gallon hat, and don’t you start no brawlin’. Stop fumblin’ with Sally-Anne she’s just a broke ol’ toy. It’s my turn for a night of fun So come o’er here cowboy. Hang yer belt up on the door, ignore the ol’ grave digger, the whisky’s cheap and I am too, So come on, squeeze my trigger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/4/2014 3:04:00 PM
Makes me want to saddle up, lol. This is very entertaining. Check out, 'One Night At Dan's Tavern'. I think you will enjoy, and thanks for posting this. Jim
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Kaye Locke
Date: 8/7/2014 11:17:00 AM
Hehe, ride 'em cowboy!! Just read One Night at Dan's Tavern, it's great and I see similarities :-)
Date: 7/21/2014 8:48:00 PM
Kaye I can see a Western here, love it, like the imigary, take care.............Vera..........
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Kaye Locke
Date: 7/22/2014 3:01:00 AM
Thanks Vera. I've only just started trying to write 'to order' for the contests. It's quite challenging, but great fun! Kaye
Date: 7/17/2014 9:43:00 PM
Nothing as good as someone who tells a story with their writing... Squeeze my trigger... brought a smile!
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Kaye Locke
Date: 7/18/2014 4:50:00 AM
Always good to hear I made someone smile! Thanks so much.
Date: 7/17/2014 4:51:00 PM
This has the feel of a limerick, the pace of a torrid affair, the cadence of spur dancing footsteps, and a hair trigger ending. Good job, Kaye.
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Kaye Locke
Date: 7/18/2014 4:49:00 AM
Thank you kind sir! Though with your surname I'm not sure you'd be allowed in this here saloon ;-)
Date: 7/17/2014 8:33:00 AM
LOL love the bawdiness of the write. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Kaye Locke
Date: 7/18/2014 4:47:00 AM
Why thank you mam', glad you enjoyed it!