Love In Episodes

Such explosions of love ecstatic
from fumbling youths and naive romantics.
In wedded bliss when passions flowed
two people alone in honeymoon glow
Flammable pleasure, ignitable moments to treasure,
we did love, we did fight, You and I.

Like awaited episodes of a reality show,
responsibilities began to gnaw as they grow.
The candle of love flickered with breath abated
claiming its due from fires deflated.
Though loving was tender still quick to temper
we did love, we did fight, You and I.

The children gone and the house deserted
alone again with our quality time protected.
A simple touch, a gentle nudge then smiling,
at such an age one mistake saw patience flying.
Eyes bleary, hard or hearing but recalling clearly,
we did love, we did fight, You and I.

The rocking chair now sways to silent music
only in the eyes can one realise, such beauty.
Smoldering fires of love and reined in emotions,
memorising every tryst with pledges of devotions.
Blessed with so much given and oceans of raw passion
in abundance we lived as God promised, His love unrationed.
still we hated, we had to fight, but we did love You and I.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Faasisila Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Hi Tiaua, Thanks for your comment on my poem. I liked your love in episodes too. I think it is interesting how love changes over the seasons of life. You capture that well and your poems flow nicely. Marj mentioned a local poet used this site and now I know who your are. Manuia le afiafi, Jackie
Ioane Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 7:23 PM
Dear Jackie, thanks for dropping by and commenting on my poem, glad that you like this. Alofas, Tiaua.
Lindley Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 10:10 PM
beautiful truth complete with a rawness of loved unchained. Bravo..
Ioane Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Oh dear Robert, thanks so much for your gracing my space withyour presence especially your understanding of my pieces. I value that very much. Lots of Alofas.
Nganga Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 3:29 AM
Beautiful write TIAUA!!!
Ioane Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Thanks. for visiting and commenting dear Peninnah, I appreciate your taking the time to read this piece. Alofas and God Bless. Tiaua.
Gasun Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 10:47 AM
This is an excellent write my dear friend Tiaua. You write so well. Super love this stunning write of yours. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading one of my poems. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Ioane Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:56 AM
I am so privileged to have your comments, thanks also for taking the time to visit me. I love your work so I will bob in from time to time dear Leonora. Many hugs and 'alofas' also from here in the tropics. Tiaua.
Palli Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:55 AM
What a wonderful write! A beautiful tribute to true love!
Ioane Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Having difficulty accessing the internet from our little island here, sorry for the delay. My heartfelt thanks for your comments, and taking the time to drop by. Tiaua.
Manassian Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 11:25 AM
This is a superb write, Tiaua....I really loved how you took me through the different stages of life and yet....LOVE remains. Wow! I'm so touched by this. Welcome!!!
Ioane Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Loved having you dropping by, with comments like that my door is always open to you. Thanks a lot for the welcome - much appreciated. 'Alofas' Tiaua. ('Alofa' is love in Samoan like "aloha' in Hawaiian)
Abedin Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 10:29 AM
a nice poem. nice to read
Ioane Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Greetings to you Mohammad, thank you for your comments. I will drop by to pay you my respects very soon. Tiaua.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 7:14 AM
What a panoramic view of a relationship! Tender, loving and true! Beautiful images decorated with a majestic vocabulary and superb expressions! Very mature and meaningful! Thank you dear Tiaua!
Ioane Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Dear Demetrios, so honoured to have your comments and what a welcome to a family of distinquished poets. I was just going to give up when you visited-thank you very much.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 4:49 AM
- Really lovely written Tiaua - well done :) - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ioane Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 4:37 AM
Sorry for the delay in replying dear Anne. Thank you for taking the time to comment, your visit is very much appreciated. Have a beautiful day also and many 'alofas' from here in the Pacific. Tiaua.
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