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Love In a Lane 2

Day
Passed by,
Reliving.
Parked in a lane,
Hid from watchers as we lovingly kissed,
Losing count of love as emotions thrilled.
Until sunset
Meant time up,
We left
Sad.

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Kim Rodrigues

June 6, 2023 at 12:56 PM

Somewhere in the past, lost in the arms, eyes and lips of passion! For sure!

Len Gasun

June 6, 2023 at 1:50 AM

Beautiful and romantic nonet poem you've penned my dear friend. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

I Am Anaya

June 5, 2023 at 11:09 AM

A lover's lane -fooling around like teenagers, then a nervous stomach, that feeling that you get when you're in trouble, maybe a first walk of shame? Viva la romance!

Yann Rolland

June 4, 2023 at 12:38 AM

i love temptations , when they last very long, this is touching and beautifully written have a nicce suday

Jan Allison

June 3, 2023 at 1:30 PM

very romantic indeed Victor:-) hugs Jan your poem is proof of they saying ...parting is such sweet sorrow:-(

Evelyn Judy Buehler

June 3, 2023 at 12:09 PM

Parting is such sweet sorrow. Love this romantic piece, Victor.

Eve Roper

June 3, 2023 at 10:44 AM

Awe, not enough time... I remember those times with my soul mate. A fav.. Hugs my very dear friend

Sotto Poet

June 3, 2023 at 6:13 AM

In its succinctness, this piece radiates beauty and emotion. Cherished moments convey the essence of ardor and passion.

Vijay Pandit

June 3, 2023 at 5:17 AM

Moments treasured--now speak of love and romance.

Lisa Ricci

June 3, 2023 at 3:52 AM

Well now Victor. Of course one would leave sad after spending a beautiful moment in time such as you describe. This is beautiful and expressive even in its brevity. Have a great weekend. Peace and Peace once more. Love and Blessings now and always. a (smile)

Tom Cunningham

June 3, 2023 at 3:51 AM

Very romantic verse Victor, brought back happy memories for me. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sara Kendrick

June 3, 2023 at 3:35 AM

Ahh!! Romantic lines penned. Special memories were made though which can bring a smile to your face when they come up into the light again. Thank you for sharing this one full of emotion and for dropping by my poem, "The Port full Of Harbor Ships". Sara