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Love Hints

I was trying to be fair Hiding all my fragile tears From a man who didn't seem To notice all my future dreams Magazines of pretty brides Tuxes, suits, and fancy ties Romantic movies on date night Love songs playing in the night Pointing out rings in the store A man I will always adore Oblivious to all I want Even though I've tried to flaunt Signs on front of his blind eyes That I want our heartstrings tied Together for now and always Maybe adding extra foreplay Will entice him to begin A day of really noticing We were meant for one another When he's near I start to shudder With excitement and the joy Knowing he's my sexy boy Even though my wedding day Seemed to never come my way Until one morning he was there In his eyes were lots of tears With a ring and bended knee He took my hand so shakily A timid voice and loving speech Now were lying on the beach This honeymoon will always last The hints I gave him in the past Joined us forever till the end We'll always be best of friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/4/2014 4:48:00 PM
Congrats on the placement here Robin..'
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:13:00 AM
Sometimes us guys are a bit dense *lol* I'm glad you found your Hapily ever after. This was one of my personal favorites for the contest. Well done and congratulations.
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Date: 2/1/2014 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", robin
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Date: 11/3/2013 3:26:00 PM
A beautiful touching story....glad he took all those hints you threw his way and may your heartstrings be forever tied. Hugs
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt, with strong emotion, as always. Nicely penned, Sweet Pea <3
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