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Love Grows Up Premiere Contest Winner

My smiling Cedric sings to me. He's loud and often gets off key. I just don't care cuz he's so fine! We can't date yet. We're only nine. ******************* We’re nineteen. Cedric’s still the one. Our wedding plans, we have begun. Although he sings to me sometime, I know our life will be sublime! ******************* My Cedric often sings to me and--Bless him!—still can’t find the key. No other man could be so fine. Our years of marriage? Twenty-nine. posted January 31, 2018 (revised, added 3rd stanza, September 1, 2018) February 11, 2018, entered in Cecelia-Hopkins Drewer's Valentines Day Poetry contest September 1, 2018, entered in Michelle Faulkner's Still the One Contest

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Date: 1/6/2019 2:51:00 PM
It's so nice to see how relationships change through the years, while some things remain the same. May he find the key! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/7/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Carolyn! Janice
Date: 1/6/2019 10:23:00 AM
Lovely, Janice. Congrats on your top win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/6/2019 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 1/4/2019 10:09:00 PM
love For a lifetime! Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/5/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thanks so much! Janice
Date: 1/4/2019 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/4/2019 2:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 2/19/2018 12:21:00 PM
So pleased to see this cute little poem as a premiere winner. BIG congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/19/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 2/17/2018 10:45:00 AM
Really sweet win Janice, congratulations...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie. Janice
Date: 2/16/2018 1:20:00 AM
Double congratulations.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/16/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kai! Janice
Date: 2/15/2018 9:27:00 AM
Wow...congratulations on your win. Lucid lovely writing. I love this poem.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Samuel! Janice
Date: 2/15/2018 7:30:00 AM
Back with congrats Janice--elegant poem deserving of top honors!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 11:32:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 10:13:00 PM
"We're only nine." --- What a novel idea!---at least for all those out there who are more than a few years removed from that tender age, unlike us...Thanks for a sweet poem, and congrats on your trophy win! Best wishes, gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 7:41:00 PM
So very sweet, Janice! Love the way your love grew! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy Win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2018 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 7:32:00 PM
I love this, didn't see the ending coming, nice, congratulations on ur first place win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2018 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lewis! Janice
Date: 2/8/2018 10:20:00 AM
Janice, this made me smile and reflect on whats important. Much appreciation for your gift.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/8/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kevin! Janice
Date: 2/2/2018 8:19:00 AM
Wow! Excellent, Janice, congratulations on your win:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/2/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo! Janice
Date: 1/31/2018 10:00:00 PM
Dear Janice, that is a very lovely poem. Congrats on a winner.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/1/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 1/31/2018 3:34:00 PM
Sweet love...love the way the two stanzas grow older together..well written, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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