Love Grows Up Premiere Contest Winner

My smiling Cedric sings to me.
He's loud and often gets off key.

I just don't care cuz he's so fine!
We can't date yet. We're only nine.

     *******************

We’re nineteen. Cedric’s still the one.
Our wedding plans, we have begun.

Although he sings to me sometime,
I know our life will be sublime!

    *******************

My Cedric often sings to me
and--Bless him!—still can’t find the key.

No other man could be so fine.
Our years of marriage?  Twenty-nine.



posted January 31, 2018  (revised, added 3rd stanza, September 1, 2018)


February 11, 2018, entered in Cecelia-Hopkins Drewer's Valentines Day 
Poetry contest

September 1, 2018, entered in Michelle Faulkner's Still the One Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/6/2019 2:51:00 PM
It's so nice to see how relationships change through the years, while some things remain the same. May he find the key! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/7/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Carolyn! Janice
Date: 1/6/2019 10:23:00 AM
Lovely, Janice. Congrats on your top win.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/6/2019 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 1/4/2019 10:09:00 PM
love For a lifetime! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/5/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thanks so much! Janice
Date: 1/4/2019 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/4/2019 2:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 2/19/2018 12:21:00 PM
So pleased to see this cute little poem as a premiere winner. BIG congrats, Janice.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/19/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 2/17/2018 10:45:00 AM
Really sweet win Janice, congratulations...
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie. Janice
Date: 2/16/2018 1:20:00 AM
Double congratulations.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/16/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kai! Janice
Date: 2/15/2018 9:27:00 AM
Wow...congratulations on your win. Lucid lovely writing. I love this poem.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Samuel! Janice
Date: 2/15/2018 7:30:00 AM
Back with congrats Janice--elegant poem deserving of top honors!
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 11:32:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Janice.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 10:13:00 PM
"We're only nine." --- What a novel idea!---at least for all those out there who are more than a few years removed from that tender age, unlike us...Thanks for a sweet poem, and congrats on your trophy win! Best wishes, gershon
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 7:41:00 PM
So very sweet, Janice! Love the way your love grew! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy Win! Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2018 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra! Janice
Date: 2/14/2018 7:32:00 PM
I love this, didn't see the ending coming, nice, congratulations on ur first place win
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2018 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lewis! Janice
Date: 2/8/2018 10:20:00 AM
Janice, this made me smile and reflect on whats important. Much appreciation for your gift.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/8/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kevin! Janice
Date: 2/2/2018 8:19:00 AM
Wow! Excellent, Janice, congratulations on your win:)
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/2/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo! Janice
Date: 1/31/2018 10:00:00 PM
Dear Janice, that is a very lovely poem. Congrats on a winner.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/1/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 1/31/2018 3:34:00 PM
Sweet love...love the way the two stanzas grow older together..well written, Janice.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter