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Love Gone Before

Dear God,

     As these hearts, ailed with sadness
     Look for reasons in the dark
     Turn their loss to hope and gladness
     When to your light, lost love embarks.

     Finding peaceful rest beside you
     Is our prayer this soul will find 
     Into your arms with joy to cling to
     From pain and sorrow left behind.

     Tis but a whisper of your goodness
     That offers all that seek a home
     Forever promised in its pureness
     Null of fear to ever roam.

     Pray, we someday see the reason
     Not for them but we who wait
     That when it becomes our season
     We will not pine to meet our fate.

     Treasured love who’s gone before,
                Be at peace forever more…

     Prayer Contest
     Sponsored by Eve Roper
     Love Gone Before© 
     08/17/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 11:09 PM
This poem is so beautiful and moving it brought tears to my eyes Charlie! A 7 for sure and a fave! ; )
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Thank you Connie, peace be with you...
Warrior Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Congrats!!! Charlie on your win...excellent write my friend...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Many thanks WW! He has...
Arnone Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Very good, Charlie. Enjoyed! :-)
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Tom...
Scars Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Charlie, this is beautiful! congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Thank you LuLoo...
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Thank you so very much for such an inspiring prayer, Charlie, such a beautiful well said poem. Michael is so right.....Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Thank you Eve and thanks for sponsoring...
Raven Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:36 AM
Hi Charlie, an excellent work. such a simple yet heart felt and beautiful prayer. Through your gentle words one does feel a peace and hope within your words. Love is never lost, it always finds a home. This is a well thought out write Charlie, beautiful. THis has to be a seven and a fave. In a day when i have to find my inner peace, reading your work surely shall help me get there....Mike.
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Thank you Mike, from your words this piece won a prize for me...
Y. Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Hi Charlie, What a lovely prayer you penned. Within these lines I find "hope". Well done. A Big seven: -) Alexis
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:27 PM
So kind of you to say Alexis, thank you...
Richards Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 1:45 PM
There is such a soft and gentle touch to your poetry, Charlie. Another gem is this!
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Carrie, for such lovely thoughtfulness...
Nance Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 7:27 PM
What a lovely write, we all need a prayer, this world is so dark, light needs to shine.
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thank you Casarah...
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