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Love Fun and Poetry By John Moses Freeman ~once my love did smile, and laughed in youth’s due seasons, yes these old prune lips… ~fun kissed many moons, and did frolic in the sun, winning smile quite bright, withering as juices dried, now the wisdom lines are drawn… ~my poetry lives to tell, of my youthful foolish smiles, youth in wisdom has turned grey, age has it's privy! For and in honor of Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S

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Date: 7/21/2011 6:46:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congrats John on your wonderful win in this contest of Linda's..love, gautami
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Date: 6/9/2011 12:08:00 PM
Hey there John, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest :) blessings to you - tc
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:29:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, John : )
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:29:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved win in linda marie's contest
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:01:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, john
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your 7th place win in my contest luv..
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:32:00 AM
Very good John, you outdid yourself. Not all were foolish smiles, some were educational grins.
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:22:00 AM
~~~that little ~line is my favorite! Nice poem.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:22:00 PM
Well done John.. Reads like a classic. Sure she is thrilled. God bless.
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Date: 5/30/2011 8:03:00 AM
Indeed your poetry lives to tell the story of your youth! Nicely done John! love, Carrie
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:14:00 AM
Loved the last sentence of this poem John. I think as we get the gray hair we become a little wiser. ha ha. I enjoyed reading your poem this morning. Congrats on your win on Nette's contest . Have a great day. love phyl
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Date: 5/30/2011 5:11:00 AM
this was nicely written, good luck in the contest.. cory
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Date: 5/29/2011 10:59:00 PM
Hi John--I think you have "arrived"---this poem proves it! This poem shows your wisdom and strength of character! Let the youth learn lessons from us old fuddy duddys. God is good! Life is good! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:02:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this one John, loved that last stanza.
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:44:00 PM
Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winer to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2011 5:22:00 AM
Very wll done John , age has it's wisdom!Anne
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:21:00 AM
well crafted Tanka. good luck in the contest. It looks like a winner to me. Steve
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Date: 5/26/2011 7:39:00 PM
EVen though about youth and fun, it's also deep and pondering. Very good writing, john!
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:05:00 PM
Enjoyed this read tonight. Have a great one.
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:46:00 AM
A wonderful entry for the contest, I loved each line, I am sure Linda will like it~~
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:44:00 AM
A beautifully penned piece, John. Being of a certain vintage myself, I can identify with this! Regards, Robert.
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