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Love Forever Fades Away

LOVE FOREVER FADES AWAY!!!! wrote by Mrs.Madhavi Waving like the sea, Your decision was bias. You ought to give me wedding ring, But set my dreams on fire. Can you answer me for the single reason, what made you do this? Was it the beauty? Was it the caste, or the complexion? You said I am your love at first sight. You were the one who took the initiative and intended to keep it up. You were the one who delightedly filled my heart with zeal of love. You were the one who elegantly filled the warmth of love in my soul. Confronted with an unsolvable dilemma’s where there is no right answer, we always know the answer to everything. But what you did? You just made false promises. Still you define it as the love, true love? Or the love that vanished with no reason. Answer me, answer me, my thee?? Near the bandra reclamation, Sitting at the amusement park, You were the one who excitedly expressed your thirsty feelings. You were the one who stared at me without closing your eyes for a single second. But you were the one who set my dreams on fire. You said you will ask your parent’s for lifetime commitment? But I will ask you one thing, if you feel your parents will understand and decide your love, then why you fell in love? If you know that story wont line up with an happy ending, then what made you do this? It’s just the pain you mounted on my heart. You just broke my heart. When you blamed, that it’s the caste, it hurted me like hell. Answer me my love, what made you do this? I was happy being single. Then, why you disturbed my life with no reason? Then, why I got so much acquainted with you for all season? It’s was so easy, that you picked up different slices of life but why Castism you did my almighty? In the bruising darkness just left with ashes of memories, lying my face down in ignorance. You broke my trust for all the life time in my way. But still you left the happy prints, as a hope of ray. It’s because of you, Love forever fades away. But still left with the mementoes of yours, reminded me every day!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2014 8:11:00 PM
Madhavi, thank you for the comment on my comment..PD
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Date: 4/10/2014 7:30:00 AM
Nice flow of words and expressions. Congrats on a fine win, madhavi
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 7/28/2014 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram @@mads
Date: 4/9/2014 8:50:00 PM
Hello Oce again Madhavi, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 7/28/2014 2:17:00 PM
thanks PD. @@mads
Date: 8/26/2013 5:01:00 PM
in peace a person could be in a lifetime with no worries than someone walks in and makes promises raising hopes and to just throw the mud that came out of their mouth in your face is just cruel but it happens and we must find ways to overcome the hurt, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 4/9/2014 12:21:00 PM
Thanks PD.. ^^mads^^
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 9/8/2013 12:07:00 PM
Hi linda, Please Go through my new poem..I hope you may enjoy it.. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=502244
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 8/29/2013 2:38:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thanks for understanding my thoughts which I tried to express in my poem.Love & Hugs....tcr..-- Madhavi

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