Deb Wilson Poet Limerick

Love Fever

Adrift on this river of fire
A love that is built to inspire
Brings me to my knees
Has me begging please
To relieve my raging desire




for contest"Unspeakable Love" sponsored by Adeleke Adeite

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Zzzzz Zzzzz July 6, 2011 at 2:43 AM Interesting use of the Limerick format. Nicely done.

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2011 at 3:22 PM a passionatable write, very dearing to your soul the love has you, enjoyed your write Deb,..p.d.

Robert Pettit February 19, 2011 at 9:46 AM This is a different kind of limerick. No humor here, but quite a bit of sultry descriptiveness. Adeleke should like this one.