Love Far Better 2nd Time Around

Don't quite know

Or understand why 

But 2nd time around

Thing's are beginning

To make far more better sense

Clearer and clearer after all

In the present tense

The message now is contextualy pure

Of that I am now sure

Like when I got sunburned

Turned my skin from white to pink

Was obviously the reason why

We ended up stuck inside together

Much like when I got flu

You then looked after and cared for me

When you didn't actually have to

You could just quite as well

Have gone outside and played

Whilst enjoying the sun shine as well

But yet again you didn't did you

You rather chose to remain

Inside beside me

Till at the end of the day

It went dark and the pair of us

Could go outside together and breathe

Which is maybe perhaps the reason why

I now find it so much more far precious

The 2nd time around

As apposed to the 1st

As I am older now

And with age

Came appreciation also as well 

Only regretful shame is it came a bit to late 

To save the day

And our love 

Now that I eventually finally figured out

I want the hole wide world to know it

Most especially of all you

Because I never ever even

Told you , proved it 

Let alone was actually able to show it

Even with all of your support love and help
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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