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True events of Grandma’s passing.

LOVE EXPRESSED AT HEAVEN’S DOOR As she died, a single tear rolled down cheek, A few loved ones gathered around her bed. Explosion of the sun — heaven did speak. Her weary bones rest. To the Lord she’s wed. A few loved ones gathered around her bed. Moments before — dramatic lightning storm. Her weary bones rest. To the Lord she’s wed. Now she resides in God’s arms — safe and warm. Moments before — dramatic lightning storm. Reflecting in sunshine’s window — a deer. Now she resides in God’s arms - safe and warm. In awe, her kin see there’s nothing to fear. Reflecting in sunshine’s window — a deer. Explosion of the sun — heaven did speak! In awe, her kin see there’s nothing to fear. As she died — a single tear rolled down cheek. 4/24/2018

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Date: 4/24/2018 8:18:00 PM
A most lovely and loving death scene.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 4/24/2018 3:03:00 PM
A sad story, but elegant Pantoum..feels so real and touching, and it is..well written, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!

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