Love Evolved From Trust

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Sonnet
Fourteen lines 10 syllables per line with a typical... abab cdcd efef gg rhyming scheme.

Lipogram
A lipogram is a composition from which the writer systematically omits a certain letter or certain letters of the alphabet.

Diving deep into the depths of her soul my soul melded with hers, touching its core. Smiling shyly, relinquishing control, she seductively sighed, desiring more. Flecks of sunlight gilded her honeyed locks, like spun gold gently blowing in the wind. We locked ourselves in time, no need for clocks, or forgiveness, for neither of us sinned. Our two lonely souls melded into one, there could be no I or me, only we. We no longer needed to find someone, for the moment I found her, she found me. It is no surprise love evolved from trust, but so did hope; look it up if you must. (Sonnet/ Lipogram No Letter "A") 08/06/2020

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/1/2023 6:17:00 AM

A really beautiful love sonnet, Emile, you make this lipogram seem so easy:)

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2023 7:19:00 AM

Thanks, Joanna; as always, I appreciate and enjoy your comments, my friend, Emile.

Evelyn Swartz

Date: 6/5/2021 8:57:00 AM

That's deep. Great write!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/5/2021 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Evelyn, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/26/2020 10:21:00 AM

Hello Emile, Emile this is a beautiful poem. I love every word written in this poem. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/27/2020 11:58:00 AM

Hello Emile Pinet, now i can read this poem any time. Enjoy your day my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/26/2020 5:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Darlene, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2020 8:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "It is no surprise love evolved from trust,." So very true. Enjoy your win and day...................

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/12/2020 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Paula, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/11/2020 6:51:00 AM

What a wonderful write Emile, quite an accomplishment writing a lipogram. The form is new to me and I am intrigued, it must be a challenge to write it, but I know you have the acumen to pull it off!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/11/2020 8:01:00 AM

Thanks John, I will be holding another "lipogram" contest...this time with the letter "A'" omitted, I hope you try your hand at it and enter, it is challenging, but that's what makes it worthy of a try my friend, Emile.