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when she made hot coffee in the morning, winked at me said your breakfast is warming, I was dumbstruck and knew there was a flaw, This was not from wife but mother in law! When he lit my cigar, paid for dinner, said how good I was and such a winner, I was dumbstruck and knew there was a flaw, This was not my brother - father in law! when that night dear wife cuddled up to me, head on my chest and rubbed my tummy, I was dumbstruck when the truth hit me raw, can her parents please stay six months extra?
Written 14/08/2021 Dumbstruck poetry contest Charles Messina sponsored 10 syllables each line

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Date: 8/22/2021 10:53:00 AM
Loved this excellent take on contest theme. As usual you excelled in making me laugh. Thanks
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/22/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Rama! a common theme in Many homes!
Date: 8/14/2021 6:32:00 AM
Best of luck. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/14/2021 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Gina! May God bless you too!!
Date: 8/14/2021 5:22:00 AM
Lol, love the sting at the end Krish, best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Hope you're well. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/14/2021 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Tom. Yes, chilling out!

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