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Love Emerged

Trusting you, I let love emerge, one gentle moment at a time. Each embrace, your arms did purge, the bitter dregs of faithless wine. One gentle moment at a time, you softly, sipped away my tears. The bitter dregs of faithless wine, no longer bound me in fear. You softly sipped away my tears as I felt my hearts rebirth. No longer bound me in fear, the shy uncertainty of my worth. As I felt my hearts rebirth, each embrace,your arms did purge, the shy, uncertainty of my worth. Trusting you, I let love emerge
For the contest: Lost and Found Sponsored by Catie Lindsey Placement: 4th

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Date: 9/6/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's "Lost and Found" contest Paula. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "LOST AND FOUND" poetry contest sponsored by Catie Lindsey.
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Date: 9/4/2011 8:50:00 PM
Love how you utilize the pantoum to bring you back around to the perfect ending, Paula. GREAT entry and winner for this contest on love. WRITE on, and congratulations.
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your wonderful win with this dynamic poetry my friend.. well deserved top notch ..happy holiday weekend ..luv..
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:27:00 PM
A very nice piece Paula. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:09:00 PM
YAY Paula! Well deserved win!
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Date: 9/3/2011 1:50:00 PM
An honored win...mmmmmmm good! Transparent write. A beauty! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/3/2011 1:43:00 PM
hey Paula congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/27/2011 5:41:00 AM
MultiGigaMegawow, Paula! This form for me is one of the most difficult to make flow... beautiful write is an understatement.. I bow
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Date: 8/24/2011 4:53:00 PM
I must say there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2011 3:20:00 PM
Great work that reads like winning material..Good luck in Catie's contest..Sara
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