Love, Dreams and Moonlight

Beams of silver light
Dance upon calm, dark waters
and within your eyes
Your breath keeps time with the waves
You are a dream in moonlight

We walk together
Our feet feel the cool wet sand
The moon smiles on us
Warm hands touch in sliver light
Hearts are joined by love and dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 8:40 PM
So beautiful
A   Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Steven, extremely beautiful. in a world, where one can turn around and fall in love. a very tight hold on that moon. I like the eyes that will look upon all of this. breathtaking.. thank you for such a walk,, always..pd
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Beautiful poem written Steven,that I like very much. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Haick Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Aww..this is really beautiful, Steven. I will add to my Fav. List. Thanks for reading, "The Morning Star" and the kind comments. Have a blessed and joyfull Christmas! Love, Annalise
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Steven. Love, Carol
Puddifoot Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 5:24 PM
a romantic, intimate picture you paint here in this lovely tanka, congrats! :-)
Haick Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Steve. Lovely imagery! Annalise
Pettit Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 11:46 PM
This nice double tanka reminds me of summertime. I can use some of it now that we are in December.
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