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Love, Dreams and Moonlight

Beams of silver light Dance upon calm, dark waters and within your eyes Your breath keeps time with the waves You are a dream in moonlight We walk together Our feet feel the cool wet sand The moon smiles on us Warm hands touch in sliver light Hearts are joined by love and dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/10/2020 8:40:00 PM
So beautiful
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:16:00 PM
Steven, extremely beautiful. in a world, where one can turn around and fall in love. a very tight hold on that moon. I like the eyes that will look upon all of this. breathtaking.. thank you for such a walk,, always..pd
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:11:00 PM
Beautiful poem written Steven,that I like very much. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:26:00 PM
Aww..this is really beautiful, Steven. I will add to my Fav. List. Thanks for reading, "The Morning Star" and the kind comments. Have a blessed and joyfull Christmas! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Steven. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2011 5:24:00 PM
a romantic, intimate picture you paint here in this lovely tanka, congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/4/2011 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Steve. Lovely imagery! Annalise
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:46:00 PM
This nice double tanka reminds me of summertime. I can use some of it now that we are in December.
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