Love Door

knocking at the door love waiting to enter . . . will you open the door ____ | | | | |* | | | ------ David Meade 12-02-2014 Live Generously

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2015 9:14:00 AM

I so enjoyed reading and seeing this one again. Thanks for your visit today.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/17/2014 2:49:00 PM

Peek a Boo! Knock Knock! ;) It's little one....I'm here for some tea and cookies. OH! Also to read some of your fab poetry....Loved that door. I've done a door one too...I'll try to dig it up an send you the link. Hugs

David Meade
Date: 12/17/2014 4:07:00 PM

Love it!! My dear little one, the door is always open for you -- no need to knock, chi tea is on, hot bread and homemade jam! Can't wait to see your door poem!! By the way -- you make may day!! Big BEAR Hugs!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2014 3:50:00 PM

this is so nice. I am glad I found it among all the others. one that I had missed somehow.

Cona Adams

Date: 12/15/2014 10:12:00 AM

This would be a haiku (American style) were it not for the door you have so cleverly drawn. That makes it a concrete. Good job!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2014 4:34:00 PM

Short but very significant. Some people are short of hearing, others pretend not to hear, some are hesitant...but the prize goes to those who open the door with open arms. Well done David! #7 // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/6/2014 11:55:00 PM

Love this, David! Revelations 3:20 is one of my favorite verses. It reminds me of my grandma and how she taught me to love the Lord...wanted to thank you for commenting on my son's poem. I know he'll be thrilled to read the comments tomorrow and maybe he'll take a prayer request or two! Hugs, Rhonda

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/4/2014 9:15:00 AM

Just beautiful David! Awesome! Enjoyed it all in content and creativity, that drawn door just visually and symbolically precious my dear friend. Enjoy the day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/4/2014 8:28:00 AM

If clicks in to mind, surely. Any one of the six senses may click to open the door. After entering, examination is there of the candidate and of the examiner himself. So, better to take care before entering in to the door of love. You are a great philosopher of love depicted with a practical picture of love beautifully here. It's an excellent image. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/4/2014 7:50:00 AM

Superb! I can just picture the hesitant knocking and the hushed breathing on the other side of the door of someone thinking "Do I dare?"

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/3/2014 8:56:00 PM

Love this write David, although most poets have a definitive meaning to their work, the best ones leave room for reader interpretation. My thoughts go to so many different places. I guess you left the door open for me.

David Meade
Date: 12/10/2014 8:52:00 AM

Wide open my dear friend!! I can see you bursting through many doors with your passionate love!

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/3/2014 8:26:00 PM

Simple truth here - and a nice illustration. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Joey Peters

Date: 12/3/2014 7:50:00 PM

Brilliant Poem David.

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:26:00 PM

great is your praise but grateful I am for your comments . . . may all your doors be filled with love!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/3/2014 5:54:00 PM

Love the over all creativity of this work, very inventive the little pic of the door adds to it really well, great job short and sweet I'm glad I stopped by tonight. cheri

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:25:00 PM

Thank-you Cherl, from your writings I know that you have answered Love's knocking . . . gracious and wonderful host you are. Thank-you for spending time with me tonight!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2014 3:31:00 PM

What a clever write! The answer is yes, I heard Jesus's persistant knoking when I was in my 20s. Opening that door has proven to be my best decision.

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:22:00 PM

My brother, happy am I to hear your answer! May His love always surround you and your family -- all the very best.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/3/2014 9:58:00 AM

- YES, I would !!! - Unique! ..... And I like that! - (Post it under form: "Shape" .... welcome to my last "shape" poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:20:00 PM

Thank-you for your advice -- never know what to do with these . . . I know you have no door . . . always welcoming His love! All the very best dear friend.

Meg Anderson

Date: 12/3/2014 9:47:00 AM

David, awe sweet. I like it.

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/3/2014 9:10:00 PM

Your welcome!

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:17:00 PM

Thank-you Meg, sweeter is your visit -- thank-you! Love and light!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2014 9:14:00 AM

Yes, He waits patiently doesn't He..Thanks for the visit to my page..Use some WD40 on that rust and keep on rollin'..Sara

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:17:00 PM

Yes, very thank-you for Love's patients . . . I am sometime hard of hearing and don't realize the knocking. WD40 is a great idea! One foot in front of another.

Kp Nunez

Date: 12/2/2014 10:02:00 PM

Symbolic, for love can only knock, it can never force itself so you got to let it in...or not. Thought provoking, yet heart-warming. Great write you have here, David. Kim Patrice :)

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:15:00 PM

Thank-you dear Kim and wise you are . . . may your heart always be warmed by love! Thank-you for sharing with me -- it has brought me great joy.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/2/2014 2:58:00 PM

Great question... We are always hoping yes..beautiful David

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:13:00 PM

May you always hear the love knock and find great joy in opening the door. All the very best dear friend.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/2/2014 2:35:00 PM

Brilliant poem with a picture. Nicely done David.

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:11:00 PM

I am such an artist!! Doors I can do -- it's those stinkin cows that give me fits!! All the very best dear friend.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/2/2014 2:02:00 PM

Always will open a door of love. That door should always be open again love the creativeness. love phyl

David Meade
Date: 12/3/2014 8:10:00 PM

Yes, great point my dear friend -- but often we close it thinking it will protect us from harm!! May love's door always be open and fill you will light and love!!