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Love Doesn'T Conquer Fate

She has no fear And has no ear To lose a dear To hear the words He is desperate And wants not to separate To become very intimate From the one of his dream But she doesn't care And his heart was bare And his love was rare But she knows not this And he continue to walk near And she continue to smear To the object of his fear Him in her trivial words Then it took long a many year And time walks away there And time walks away here But love never won.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/12/2016 6:42:00 PM

Brilliant concept White Sage, nice you wrote explanation on reading. It does one good to read new creative styles. Well done my friend....Vladislav.

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 8:11:00 AM

thanks Vladislav...

White Sage

Date: 12/27/2015 3:09:00 PM

please note. This poem is not plain. The lines are all entwined, the first line is continued on the third line, you leave the second and read the third after the first line, then back to second line, after second line you omit the third and read the fourth line. so, the first is linked to the third, and the second to the fourth, the fifth to the seventh as sixth to eighth, it goes on like that. am not sure this is fascinating, but I guess my mind just brought it

White Sage
Date: 12/27/2015 5:05:00 PM

you are welcome

Lin Lane
Date: 12/27/2015 4:14:00 PM

You held the pen so your mind created something new. Thanks for explaining how it should be read. It's very creative.