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Love Doesn'T Conquer Fate

She has no fear
And has no ear
To lose a dear
To hear the words

He is desperate
And wants not to separate
To become very intimate
From the one of his dream

But she doesn't care
And his heart was bare
And his love was rare
But she knows not this


And he continue to walk near
And she continue to smear
To the object of his fear
Him in her trivial words

Then it took long a many year
And time walks away there
And time walks away here
But love never won.

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Vladislav Raven Date: 1/12/2016 6:42:00 PM Brilliant concept White Sage, nice you wrote explanation on reading. It does one good to read new creative styles. Well done my friend....Vladislav. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 8:11:00 AM thanks Vladislav...

White Sage Date: 12/27/2015 3:09:00 PM please note. This poem is not plain. The lines are all entwined, the first line is continued on the third line, you leave the second and read the third after the first line, then back to second line, after second line you omit the third and read the fourth line. so, the first is linked to the third, and the second to the fourth, the fifth to the seventh as sixth to eighth, it goes on like that. am not sure this is fascinating, but I guess my mind just brought it Login to Reply White Sage Date: 12/27/2015 5:05:00 PM you are welcome Lin Lane Date: 12/27/2015 4:14:00 PM You held the pen so your mind created something new. Thanks for explaining how it should be read. It's very creative.