Judith S Poet Rhyme

Love Dies

Oh, this hurt - this pain won’t end
My heart , my soul, you were my friend
Crumbled autumn leaves turned brown
Blown away without a sound

Silent, my tears, from blue eyes made red
Your love dies with me alone in my bed
Release my love from the prison you’ve made
Release my heart that was yours if you stayed.


Written for:  Rhyme Battle IX
Sponsored by:  Juli-Michelle
October 17, 2017

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Muhammad Imtiaz February 5, 2018 at 12:31 AM Lovely withering of Love ....... Lovely lementations Release my love from the prison you’ve made Release my heart that was yours if you stayed. Judith S February 5, 2018 at 6:22 PM Thank you so much for your visit Muhammad ... and your kind comments. Best, Judy

Susan Ashley January 26, 2018 at 6:37 PM Such lovely lamentations Judy. Your sorrow is wonderfully heartfelt and dramatic in its expression. Another great write my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Judith S February 5, 2018 at 6:22 PM Thank you dear Susan. This reply to your comment is a little late. My apologies. I always appreciate your visits and amazing comment! :) <3 Judy

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2018 at 1:11 AM short and oh so bittersweet. I like this one a lot, sweetie, Judith S January 18, 2018 at 2:18 AM Thank you dear Andrea!! So sweet of you to explore my poems. You are a genuine original my friend ??. ~ Judy

Silent One November 2, 2017 at 3:58 PM A very sad write...

Richard Lamoureux October 28, 2017 at 8:55 AM Some men are fools. Good luck in the contest. Judith S October 29, 2017 at 10:56 AM As are some women ;) Again ... thank you!!!!!!

Charlie Smith October 17, 2017 at 11:56 AM Well rhymed Judith, best wishes in the contest... Judith S October 17, 2017 at 7:50 PM Thank you very much for your kind wishes Charlie. Best, Judy