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Love Dies

Oh, this hurt - this pain won’t end
My heart , my soul, you were my friend
Crumbled autumn leaves turned brown
Blown away without a sound

Silent, my tears, from blue eyes made red
Your love dies with me alone in my bed
Release my love from the prison you’ve made
Release my heart that was yours if you stayed.


Written for:  Rhyme Battle IX
Sponsored by:  Juli-Michelle
October 17, 2017

Copyright © Judith S | Year Posted 2017

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Muhammad Imtiaz Date: 2/5/2018 12:31:00 AM Lovely withering of Love ....... Lovely lementations Release my love from the prison you’ve made Release my heart that was yours if you stayed. Login to Reply Judith S Date: 2/5/2018 6:22:00 PM Thank you so much for your visit Muhammad ... and your kind comments. Best, Judy

Susan Ashley Date: 1/26/2018 6:37:00 PM Such lovely lamentations Judy. Your sorrow is wonderfully heartfelt and dramatic in its expression. Another great write my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Judith S Date: 2/5/2018 6:22:00 PM Thank you dear Susan. This reply to your comment is a little late. My apologies. I always appreciate your visits and amazing comment! :) <3 Judy

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/18/2018 1:11:00 AM short and oh so bittersweet. I like this one a lot, sweetie, Login to Reply Judith S Date: 1/18/2018 2:18:00 AM Thank you dear Andrea!! So sweet of you to explore my poems. You are a genuine original my friend ??. ~ Judy

Silent One Date: 11/2/2017 3:58:00 PM A very sad write... Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/28/2017 8:55:00 AM Some men are fools. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Judith S Date: 10/29/2017 10:56:00 AM As are some women ;) Again ... thank you!!!!!!

Charlie Smith Date: 10/17/2017 11:56:00 AM Well rhymed Judith, best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Judith S Date: 10/17/2017 7:50:00 PM Thank you very much for your kind wishes Charlie. Best, Judy