Julie Alcin Poet Dramatic Verse

Love Died, So Did I

Once again 
Love has died
So did I

No one cares
About me
No one cries

No one there
By my side
No comfort

Simple tears
Tears of pain
My last ones

Touched by death
Closed my eyes
Say goodbye

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David Williams March 7, 2013 at 1:14 PM belated congrats on your win...David

Barbara Gorelick March 5, 2013 at 7:19 AM I like this even though it is very sad. congrats. BG Julie Alcin March 5, 2013 at 4:28 PM Thank you

Lori Lucas Mcclure March 5, 2013 at 5:10 AM Congratulations on your win with this most heart rending ellip! Love it! lori Julie Alcin March 5, 2013 at 4:28 PM Thank you

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 5, 2013 at 1:50 AM Congrats on your win Julie xx Julie Alcin March 5, 2013 at 4:29 PM Thank you

Debra Squyres March 4, 2013 at 7:11 PM So very sad !! I'm sure someone cares. Strong raw voice in your ellip. Congrats on your placement Julie Alcin March 5, 2013 at 4:29 PM Thank you

Audrey Haick March 4, 2013 at 12:00 PM Congratulations on a very fine win, Julie. Annalise Julie Alcin March 5, 2013 at 4:29 PM Thank you

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2013 at 10:10 AM Julie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA Julie Alcin March 5, 2013 at 4:28 PM Thank you