Joe Maverick Poet Rhyme

Love Daylight and Colour

Falling shades and bolder tones,
now are wreathed 
across the glen and over the fells,
exposed rocks show like earths bones
currents of subtle air glow, 
 host to an ultra-violet dispersal
as iridescent colours inflow,
drawings, from a well of inspiration 
my God alone does know.




Copyright Joe Maverick 2011

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Nathan D. November 13, 2015 at 10:53 AM love the ending.

Elizabeth Wesley July 20, 2012 at 7:35 PM Such descriptive phrasing brings a certain magic to the page with this stunning array of nature to feast on. Love this work of yours Joe. Luv, Elizabeth

Don Johnson June 23, 2012 at 4:19 PM but all is there upon display, when time is had to see your way, a paint of picture comes today, picturesque of the image painting....hey

Funom Makama June 11, 2012 at 5:20 AM This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Michelle Mac Donald May 10, 2012 at 8:12 AM You are a master of imagery, Joe! "rocks show like earths bones", very unusually authentic!! God is the master of conception, but he needs one such as you to have us admire His work. A clever write, by the clever YOU! Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Judy Ball January 27, 2012 at 5:34 PM WoW! This is excellent Joe. what a beautiful picture yoou paint here. Godd Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2012 at 9:45 PM btw, I noticed you said at your contest page that you had only received two poems on your topic. I think it could be that people don't quite understand what you are wanting. maybe you could blog about it? Luv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2012 at 9:12 PM Back to one of my favorites of yours. WAiting to see a clerihew from you. Maybe this weekend?? Luv, Andrea

Nancy Jones January 2, 2012 at 10:44 AM How lonely for your God to be the only one knowing... is my knee-jerk reaction to this beautiful write.. go figure. Blessings abound, please write on, Joe! Namaste ~N

Daver Austin December 3, 2011 at 12:37 PM I agree - some scenery, some art, some music, defies description. I enjoy the art's critics in the newspapers, trying to describe some work of art. If it was a masterpiece, the less said the better. You have to experience it inwardly where God dwells. Love, daver

Robert A. Dufresne November 18, 2011 at 10:55 AM Hey Joe I see from the comments that you took a win with this one. That's good news.... renews my faith in the judges. It's a great poem my friend

James Fraser October 23, 2011 at 2:22 PM Many congratulations Joe on your deserved win with this Gem. May I say thank you for your kind words, much appreciated :)

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2011 at 2:43 AM So glad to see this one won a contest. Congrats, JOe.

Elizabeth Wesley October 14, 2011 at 7:38 PM Just one of His very special gifts - autumn - Love the imagery in this peaceful verse. So soothing Joe !

Wilma Neels October 7, 2011 at 12:21 AM Wow, this is really beautiful Joe and I could not agree with you more on you last line ;) stunning write!! Congrats to you as well ~ wilma

Ralph Taylor October 6, 2011 at 4:10 PM Congrats on your win, Joe. Great job. Ralph

Robert A. Dufresne October 5, 2011 at 7:02 PM beautiful Joe! great imagery. Love it. I see you took a first place. Congratulations to you on a well deserved win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 5, 2011 at 4:29 PM Congrats Joe on a brilliant first place win with this rare beauty poetry my friend...kudos..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire October 5, 2011 at 3:46 PM Wow, what a beautiful take on the theme, Joe. Original and filled with inspiration. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson October 5, 2011 at 2:40 PM A beautifully crafted poem. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2011 at 6:56 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "October-Your Choice" contest Joe. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley October 1, 2011 at 9:28 PM Yes, the bolder tones are just staring to show up here. You describe my favorite time of year beautifully Joe. Keep up your great work! :)

Nancy Jones September 28, 2011 at 9:06 PM lol... hope this wins, too... wow! bowing off to read some more,,, thanks!~N

Judy Ball September 27, 2011 at 5:39 PM This is just so beautiful Joe. Loved every word. Describes the season so well. Thanks for sharing this exceptional piece. God Bless, JB

Wayne Hill September 27, 2011 at 10:24 AM this brightened my day.

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