Sona Wilae Poet Sonnet

Love Dance

My thoughts frolicked and danced unchained
Never leave, surely my spirit might die
Beautiful memories rampant and lovingly untamed.
Of thirst, loss to great my heart to try.


Roses bring colors too rich to ignore,
Come stay, lay quiet as we breathe
Your musk exudes strength I adore.
May God keep your peace, never leave.

A carnation of promises, not once broken
Take me battered and renew my Me,
Leaving not stain of hurt, sweet thought unspoken.
Which only you, my God, and soul have the key.

Beat and march as we march as one
For truly my life, you gallantly won.

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Abed Anthony November 7, 2017 at 11:46 PM well free flowing of ideas Sona Wilae November 8, 2017 at 12:19 PM Thank you

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 14, 2017 at 6:34 AM Beautiful poem, Sona. A passionate interweaving of faith, hope and love. You are one fine talented poetess. Sona's sonnet made this wallflower heart dance. After reading this poem, ole Jackie boy was right ... life ain't so bad after all. Especially when their another to do the tango w/you. Righteous poetry. Star light bright. Love and hugs always. Sona Wilae October 14, 2017 at 9:34 AM Thank you

Gregory Richard Barden October 13, 2017 at 11:24 PM Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Sona - keep up the great writing! :-) Sona Wilae October 13, 2017 at 11:49 PM Thank you...Encouraging.

Eve Roper October 11, 2017 at 7:41 PM Sona, congratulations on your win! Sona Wilae October 11, 2017 at 8:54 PM Thank you ever so much!

Constance La France October 11, 2017 at 7:40 PM Sona, congratulations on your win ! Sona Wilae October 11, 2017 at 9:05 PM Thank you again...I really appreciate the support and encouragement.

Darren White October 4, 2017 at 1:01 AM It's a sort of upside down sonnet :) Normally the couplet (two lines) are at the end of the sonnet. I like it nevertheless. Sona Wilae October 4, 2017 at 10:06 PM I made some changes, please critique my piece. Thank you. Sona Wilae October 4, 2017 at 3:37 PM Gotcha...Thanks

Silent One October 3, 2017 at 5:43 AM A well written poem Sona, but a sonnet is 14 lines.. Sona Wilae October 4, 2017 at 10:06 PM I made adjustments, would love to read your thoughts. Sona Wilae October 3, 2017 at 2:35 PM Thank you for the correction.