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Love Dance

My thoughts frolicked and danced unchained Never leave, surely my spirit might die Beautiful memories rampant and lovingly untamed. Of thirst, loss to great my heart to try. Roses bring colors too rich to ignore, Come stay, lay quiet as we breathe Your musk exudes strength I adore. May God keep your peace, never leave. A carnation of promises, not once broken Take me battered and renew my Me, Leaving not stain of hurt, sweet thought unspoken. Which only you, my God, and soul have the key. Beat and march as we march as one For truly my life, you gallantly won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/7/2017 11:46:00 PM
well free flowing of ideas
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Sona Wilae
Date: 11/8/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/14/2017 6:34:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Sona. A passionate interweaving of faith, hope and love. You are one fine talented poetess. Sona's sonnet made this wallflower heart dance. After reading this poem, ole Jackie boy was right ... life ain't so bad after all. Especially when their another to do the tango w/you. Righteous poetry. Star light bright. Love and hugs always.
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/14/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/13/2017 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Sona - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/13/2017 11:49:00 PM
Thank you...Encouraging.
Date: 10/11/2017 7:41:00 PM
Sona, congratulations on your win!
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/11/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thank you ever so much!
Date: 10/11/2017 7:40:00 PM
Sona, congratulations on your win !
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/11/2017 9:05:00 PM
Thank you again...I really appreciate the support and encouragement.
Date: 10/4/2017 1:01:00 AM
It's a sort of upside down sonnet :) Normally the couplet (two lines) are at the end of the sonnet. I like it nevertheless.
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/4/2017 10:06:00 PM
I made some changes, please critique my piece. Thank you.
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/4/2017 3:37:00 PM
Gotcha...Thanks
Date: 10/3/2017 5:43:00 AM
A well written poem Sona, but a sonnet is 14 lines..
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/4/2017 10:06:00 PM
I made adjustments, would love to read your thoughts.
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Sona Wilae
Date: 10/3/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for the correction.

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