Love Confession In War

Excitement tears to pieces her heart,
Like the thunder destroys the sky.
She wants to forget, she wants to try...
But all emotions boil in the blood.

"Honey, Where are you?"
She wants to say - "I'm with you"
But there is no answer and silence around
Big rain-drops fall on the ground.

She waits so long as if time is stopped,
She is alone in the ruthless world,
She waits so long and life is dropped,
Her only thought that time is gold.

"Honey, darling, my brave soldier,
Safe your country and your life.
War is not only the fight for happy future,
It's also time to spend your single life"

She looks with fear at the window,
The clear glass is all in drops.
There are cold tears in the mirrow,
They run like water and it falls.

"Go away, go away this scaring image
In your usual world of nature,
Go away and let me know,
I understand your vivid lecture!"

When people started to fight
The bright day turns into the cruel night
War is everywhere:
In people's heart and people's head.

War is like a black evil kite,
He destroys by his wings daily light.

When people started to fight,
War settles in the house,
Nobody remembers, who is wrong or right,
But families will be apart in their rouse.

So, she stays at home and remember his face.
She dreams about the long-waited meeting,
About his touch and tender embrace,
Warm and desired greeting.

The finish will be...When? 
Who knows,
Rain will run away and drop just falls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/21/2014 10:31:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Daria :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2014 6:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Daria. Many thoughts and prayers are with your country at this time. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/19/2014 5:17:00 PM
Hi Daria, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:33:00 PM
Daria, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/19/2014 3:43:00 PM
WElcome to poetry soup ... just loved it ... so intense and sad and deep !! keep writing on ..
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