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Love Casts a Shadow

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I quest my love from the depths of silenced shadows, amongst the reclusive dimness… Where I compose my Soliloquy of Solitude as I gravitate to a ghostly grimness… Fortitude I have none, for my hermitic heart pulsates within its penumbra prison… I walk these calamitous corridors with the stench of sulfates that have ruinously risen… All I seek is you, my love, for you have gone, and thus I’m trapped in tangled thoughts… Where rivers of tears sing a sad song, my lachrymal love tied by katabolic knots… My hidden heart lays to rest, confined and consumptive, for many other hearts here weep… My eyes of devotion become blind, and Symphony of Sorrows rampageously reap. April.28.2020 Shadows Poetry Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed 5'th...Thank You

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Date: 5/7/2020 9:39:00 AM
Such a heart rendering, touching verse. Intricate, like the finest of laces. Panagiota. Xx
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Date: 4/30/2020 1:59:00 PM
A sad ending to this poem which rhymes and flows so well...
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Date: 4/30/2020 11:13:00 AM
Love's tears compose the melodic symphony of the heart my dear friend, WW ! A beautiful and touching poem! Blessings!
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Date: 4/30/2020 3:31:00 AM
Brilliant poetry, ^WW^, loved your different usage of words woven together, deep and good:)
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Date: 4/29/2020 11:05:00 PM
Another beautiful verse, ^WW^, I like the words, hermitic heart, you can feel the deep emotion in poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/29/2020 12:04:00 PM
Bravo Wingster - a beautiful poem from a beautiful person. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/29/2020 12:40:00 AM
Hi Warrior, another artistically, excellent write from your golden pen. You take us through a true poetic journey. The emotion flows down the page. Poetry at its best, my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/28/2020 3:06:00 PM
My dear bro bro, your poem is so lustrous in its sad beauty of lost-love that even the Unicorns have shed tears.. and you know how rambunctious that bunch is :)) Best wishes for a win, my artistic sib. I hope and pray you are well, big bro bro. Stay safe. Your lil sis.. Illum <3
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Date: 4/28/2020 1:16:00 PM
Hello Winged Warrior,when the love ends and one person gets hurt, pain is felt. Tears are seen and ruin the sleep. We feel a loss for what feels a lifetime before we heal. be safe. Enjoy your day my fiend.
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Date: 4/28/2020 6:21:00 AM
Wingster! Your hermetic heart is as golden as your pen. Sorry I have not been all that active lately. My son and I have been off of work for 2 weeks so we have been trout fishing every day, coming home, eating and passing out (lol) Thanks so much for your recent comments. Hope you and your family are safe and well.. Love ya, bro. Charlie
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