Love Can Mend

Within ones mind,
we cannot tread,
unless invited,
a book unread.

Questions arise,
the penetration begins,
answers given,
for healing to begin.

Darkness erased,
then light filters in,
the process,
releasing sin.

Love can conquer,
love understands,
love is the difference,
love brings friends,
love is the first step,
for a heart to mend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/12/2009 4:45:00 PM
A powerful truth of therapy, I can feel the scar below the pain. Beautiful arrangment.
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:56:00 PM
Wise message, Christy. And well-penned (as usual). Great job! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2009 8:34:00 PM
Hi Cristy , I love your work , you sure know how to express into words the way life takes us on a journey.At times shows us the right from wrong and gives us choices to choose the way we will go . Thanks again for your kind comments on my work , God Bless You and your Family.
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Date: 3/8/2009 11:57:00 PM
Hi Christy, this is a very nice narrative. I like the message. I read dozens of your poems, but I could say with sincerity...This is one of the best. Ernilando
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Date: 3/7/2009 9:38:00 AM
Dear Christy: You have conveyed the true meaning of love in this piece. Great write! Thanks for reading my poem, so glad you liked it. Pass the Raid, please. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:57:00 AM
A great little piece , I LOVE IT, i love all your writings, you do such a good job at putting them togather too.....:) Your friend always Alan Fitz.
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:40:00 AM
This is so pretty, Christy, and so true... really insightful and inspiring. :) I love the last two lines especially, yes, it all starts with love. Beautiful! :) Love, Amy
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Date: 3/3/2009 2:44:00 PM
rediscovering is part of healing in my book. why wait. john
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:07:00 AM
i know about love and how it can go. it can go away, you think, then all of sudden it is there again. makes life so wonderful don't you think? i really, love this poem. janetta
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Date: 2/28/2009 6:41:00 PM
Love conquers all, always has always will. Love is the greatest gift we can gift and the most rewarding. P.S. I found my 710 thingie, thanks, F/F, Ron
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Date: 2/28/2009 5:47:00 PM
Love the uplifting thoughts in your last stanza. So much truth in your words. Blessings to you for sharing them with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/28/2009 2:17:00 PM
Smile~Yes, "Very Very Beautiful!!!"~"Hello Precious & Lovely Christy Hardy!!!"~I sincerely hope that "You" are doing well today dear lady!!?~ What a wonderfully flowing, and gentle, a beautiful write this is here dear~this reflection I would say, of "The Beauty" inside of the writer which penned it!!!~Smile~"I Deeply Loved This Christy~'My Love Always To You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!:)
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Date: 2/28/2009 12:04:00 PM
I probably have written this before, but I am reminded here of one of my favorite songs. An old Elton John song with the lyrics "...Love is what we came here for, no one can offer you more, do you know what I mean, have your eyes really seen?.." You wrote it beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/28/2009 8:00:00 AM
Amen to that..without love we will stay in unforgiveness. Love will cause us to forgive and to reach out to others. Great write. Message conveyed nicely.
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:39:00 AM
we need love to mend loves heart break.
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:34:00 AM
Well then I need two doses of love and a band aid!! Well done Christy! This is one of those poems that just make you feel better when you read it. I'll spare you the Chicken Soup analogy!! Much love, Steve
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:04:00 AM
you are so right here Christy,love conquers all and what we do in love is never lost,God Bless,love you,Marie
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Date: 2/28/2009 6:40:00 AM
always a wonderful way to express love like Chirstopher mentioned! well written ~ Arany
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Date: 2/28/2009 5:34:00 AM
A very strong message in this piece..love can heal all wounds..nice way to start my Saturday.
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Date: 2/28/2009 5:18:00 AM
nice message :)
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