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Love Boats

Despite the crisp chill She wandered to the pebbled shore. Cold water washed her tender feet. At last, she sat beneath a pine tree on a shaven log, shaped like a bench A train of thoughts passed through her muddled mind. She wondered if life was passing her by. She shrugged. There was nothing she could do. A grey gull screeched overhead. She laughed. Ships, small or large, would go on their way, Especially love boats on their route to exotic shores, but she had to stay put, Until he came back to her again. Then she would be euphorically happy once more. Thus she dreamed and fantasized, moulding her life according to her standards. But love cannot be forced nor found on love boats. They are created deep in the heart or as was her case, lost at sea in a terrible turbulent storm.

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Date: 7/10/2021 6:13:00 AM
When you live near the sea you gain a healthy respect for the ocean but it can never be taken for granted......
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:09:00 PM
Poignant and profound, Victor. It's nice catching up to some of your poems today. We had a death in our family this week. So even though I had the week off it's been difficult getting over here. The nephew who died was only 29.
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Date: 7/9/2021 9:15:00 PM
It is always sad when a young person dies. My sister died at age 16 but that was a long time ago and there was no cure for her. They will be in my thoughts. Hugs.
Date: 7/9/2021 6:48:00 AM
I like the last stanza lines 1,2, and 3. Truth can be found there. A couple has to work on a relationship all the time for it to keep on keeping on. Life is not easy and each person has to work through those tough times and then as a couple they have to work through those tough times. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful and sad Victor, how awful it’d be losing a loved one in turbulent sea… Belle
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:18:00 PM
Such a sad poem, Victor. I have a sister in-law that when she was young she lost her husband on a fishing boat out on a storm. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/8/2021 1:49:00 PM
- An emotionally charged beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:52:00 AM
how sad when one loses their love and their life purpose, It happens all too often dear friend, it takes a strong heart to continue the living, and find reason to be :)
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Date: 7/8/2021 9:25:00 AM
Such emotion, sadness and longing fill the lines of this expressive verse. You did a wonderful job of vividly bringing to light the woman's feelings and state of mind. Alas! The sea can be cruel. :)
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Date: 7/8/2021 7:53:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You've penned such a well-written write on longing. Many can relate to how she felt. Good imagery and content. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/8/2021 7:20:00 AM
Oh! Poor girl, I sometimes wish love were not so sad, a story of longing and sadness, well crafted:)
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:15:00 AM
Your poem is amazing, Victor, exquisitely crafted as usual, with magnificent imagery and vibrant deep thoughts. Blessings and regards, good friend.
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Date: 7/8/2021 4:54:00 AM
You gave her feelings a voice. Superbly descriptive write, Victor. Expertly done as always.
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Date: 7/8/2021 4:09:00 AM
Wonderful story and lovely imagery... Enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 7/8/2021 12:00:00 AM
so full of longing and the title is perfect Victor, you have a wonderful way of storytelling and build up so many vivid images with your words, write on my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/7/2021 11:54:00 PM
Exquisitely crafted, as always, Victor!
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